anabelsinclair

Wow... Deep breath . Your writing has a lyrical quality to the words, it flows almost like song in my head. Your character has a powerful voice, and those vivid ...

I like this! Okay, two things I really appreciated 1. I liked your use of descriptive words to define not only the dragon's physical features, but also elements of their ...

Wow.... This whole piece actually made me use senses that I don't normally associate with reading. BloodinkSeesFootage's voice shines throughout this interview; I could quite easily picture the settin

This was an interesting read, but I confess I'm also a little confused. The first paragraph was really arresting but I got lost in the subsequent paragraphs. You use lots ...

Oh my... Such a disjointed, scatter brained, powerfully descriptive...poignantly emotive... gem. In my humble opinion, this is by no means boring, dull or pretentious. Anyone who has ever attempted to

Not meh, not meh at all! 'Dusty womb and empty house' encapsulates the conflict that almost every woman struggles with, when she seeks 'trophies'. And the regret evoked between the ...

I don't think there is anything about this poem that I didn't like/appreciate. Every element adds to the realism of what is going on in that instant, and you don't ...

I enjoyed reading this poem and the imagery it evoked. A candle in a casket is burning on borrowed time, is it not? There really is no rhyme or rhythm ...

This is a very intriguing read, but I suggest that you edit the current block format. It not only presents an intimidating challenge for a reader, but also makes it ...

I enjoyed the many descriptive elements of this short piece. The heart skipping a beat, midnight and darkness shattering, footsteps....wow. And I liked that even with first person POV, you ...

Asenath... She was given by the Pharaoh to Prime Minister Joseph as wife. So far, your story is keeping with the historical account. She was Potipherah's daughter, and he was ...

Short and to the point. I like it! There is so much left unsaid by these terse lines, so much left to the imagination, but in a good way. One ...

The title of this poem had me thinking of Frost's poem, 'The Road not Taken,' except two, not three. I liked the structure and rhythm of this poem, but there ...

Wow. That was quite an interesting read. This is a very compelling work, very physical and fast paced. I liked the fact that the even in the midst of action, ...

Oh my, naughty girl. Your character's voice shines through this piece and I like her amoral tone. And I also agree; sometimes when your character is that strong, describing his/her ...