anabelsinclair

Ara Ara m'bada I thought so, when I saw the title, but dismissed it. How glad am I to be wrong. There is a lyrical, almost songlike, quality to your ...

Wow, Allow me to reassure you on the quality of this chapter. Even without any background information on the characters, context or setting, I was easily lost in the scene. ...

Hello! Here to drop a review. Interesting read, I like the build up of tension throughout this piece. Your character Lucia has a strong, descriptive voice that really sells the ...

Oh my, So devastatingly succinct, yet filled with layers. The sentence structure -- bam! I enjoyed the juxtaposition between the situation and the speaker; the matter of factness grounding every ...

This was certainly an interesting read. I had to throw logic out of the window by the second paragraph, which is not something I've done in a while. This story ...

Yes! I loved this! Very spot on, and I say this as a fan of both shows. The dialogue between the brothers was on point, and I appreciate how you ...

Hello!, Just a few points 1. Seems rather succinct for a letter being sent to someone at the battle front, especially to one's fiancee. More so, considering the time of ...

Hello! One element that I could sense was the pathos behind this. Like the previous review, I believe there is a potential for even more, with just a bit more ...

Hello! Engaging read, this one, I liked the character Fade right off the bat; you did a good job of defining his personality in just a few lines (great use ...

Wow, just wow. You packed so much suspense into four seconds, that I needed to take a breath afterward. I haven't read any of the previous installments, and so my ...

Hello! Dark, bleak, low and dreary, this is. And not a little sad. A few nit-picks: Leads to a different sections of hell It's where the deepest nightmares lie I'm ...

Oh wow... Wonderful, witty, whimsical. Lovely. The structure, the flow of the lines, the descriptive words, the almost flip tone at the end? This was very well done, and I ...

I like it! Your style of writing really fits into the 'old world' Scifi fare that I was raised on, where character building melds seamlessly with plot, history and society ...

Hello! So, when I read' Scarlet River,' it immediately had a menstrual connotation that was almost inescapable throughout the entire work. Lines like It gives the world life. Without it, ...

Hello! I haven't read the previous chapters, but you've written this piece so well that I didn't have to. The nerves, tension and worry felt by everyone involved was realistic. ...