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Hey! Nice job on the start for this poem. I love the repetitive beginning as a theme that comes in each stanza. I think it does a great job keeping ...

Hey Chocolate Cello! The title of the poem drew me into reading, and when it was only 4 sentences long, I was actually a little bit happy to get a ...

A good start. I think you really could expand the story, especially the ending. It seems like the beginning of the story, and into the middle it was the "sterotypical" ...

This is really cool! I had a bunch of fun doing the WW with you. I like the amount of suspense you keep through-out the whole things and it is ...

I don't really get the Batman thing in the end. I also don't see how the suit fits in. I mean I get how some penguins where the suits, but ...

I am not sure what to think of this poem. It has a sense of humor to it, but at the same time, it is just so random. If you ...

I was laughing all the way through the poem. I saw the title and the description for the poem and I was like "oh dear what is this." Some parts ...

I feel like I have no right to make any critiques to this poem. It honestly its pretty much flawless. Just the description of it drew in and wanted to ...

I love this cause! I am really glad I read this, because it was a real shake up from all the chapters and poems I have been reading. Continue to ...

What I really like about this poem is that its relatable and simple, without being overly deep and emotional. The word choice in it is pretty good, because each stanza ...

Just the thought of the poem makes me laugh. All teenagers go through this issue, and to write about it really is bizarre and genius at the same time. If ...

This work is so genius. I have had some serious writers block latley myself, and after getting through it I am able to really understand the humor of this poem, ...

Technically, I agree with some of the reviews before. Watch the form, because it is off from the AABBA rule it is supposed to follow. Nonetheless it really is amusing ...

With poems this short it is essential that each word has meaning to it. Go through word by word and ask yourself does this word alone represent the message I ...