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I love this, it's awesome. Sad emotions, angry emotions. They swirl together and create the perfect mixture. Good job. (sorry for the pointless reply, just thought it was good and ...

So true. Not much to say about this poem, except, great job. It's awesome and intriguing and relatable. I like it. Keep it up.

Thanks for commenting! Well, earendil, that bolded line was what I tried to convey as what I was consistently told or what was implied constantly on different occasions. I think ...

I liked this a lot. It was fun to read and the ending was entertaining. I love the rhythm and how it made me laugh. It was really easy to ...

no i was trying to symbolize my life, and the spice thing....i dont know but i know i was trying to get something across maybe how life is like a ...

Thanks for the posts guys and the reason I really didn't go into detail with this is because well I was in a hurry when I posted it so I ...

I though that this poem held a certain amout of charm. I liked how it was short and simple. It was easy to understand and to relate to. This is ...

I liked how you used the context in this. It was interesting to read. I just have one question, though. Who are 'we'? Other than that it was completely understandable. ...

That was a heartfelt poem. What inspired you to write that? I liked it a lot. It was interesting. My favorite part was the ending. :) Keep writing.

Thanks for the reviews. And those three stanzas were all about the same thing so ya. And thanks for pointing out the mistake. :)

Hey thanks and I like how it is so ya I re-read it and thats how I wanted it to be but thanks for the review. :)

Thanks but I don't even think this person is my friend anymore so... Thanks for the review anyway. Keep reading. :)

I liked it. It had a constant rythym. I'm probably misspelling that. And I enjoyed reading it. Good job. :)

Thanks guys. And I know it has a few problems, of course almost everything does. Its not perfect but I'm glad you guys liked it. Hope you guys keep reading. ...

I liked this. It was a different way to look at things. I hope you keep writing, you have real promise.