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Re: variations on a theme of sadness
Hello! Came to leave a short review. I think it's interesting how you decided to focus on tears, a product people generally associate with sadness. I also like your title! ...
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Re: Antipathies (part I)
Antipathy means a strong sense of dislike towards something. Despite getting honestly confused at the poem, I could feel sarcasm radiating through the pages and also the resentment one has ...
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Re: Molly Davidson, you shattered soul
Okay, this was definitely creepy. And I believe that's the kind of vibe you're going for here. It's my first time to review your works, because I can be quite ...
Jun 22, 2023 -
Re: The Window of Opportunity
Hi, here to leave a superrr short review! I really like this poem. It's an accurate depiction of how great dads sacrifice so much for us just because they love ...
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Re: prettyboy_fromLA
Hello! I saw that this only has one review, so I figured I'll go add another one! First Impression: This poem is less "poem-y". It's more like a song. From ...
Jun 20, 2023 -
Re: Senior Year with an AL.
Hello, just wanted to leave a short review since I haven't seen anyone review it yet. I'll make this as short as I can because school is calling me. When ...
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Re: This White Tornado
Ahh, a limerick I see It is light-hearted and happy It's well done, for sure, With proper structure. You did it quite nicely. (see what I did there HAHAH) But ...
Jun 18, 2023 -
Re: Experiences: Eight
Hello! I'm guessing this relates to your poem "Experiences: Six" since they have similar themes. This person must mean a whole lot to you and I want to thank you ...
Jun 18, 2023 -
Re: Delusional Love Colors
Came to leave a short review! This gives Alice in the Wonderland vibes because of how random, fantastical, and vivid it is. Since I don't have much time to review, ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: i_cantgotosleep
Dropping by for a quick review! First Impression: I like how this poem had its ups and downs. One thing I noticed was the style of your rhymes and it ...
Jun 16, 2023 -
Re: margaret & agnes
Alright where should I start? Let's start with prominent themes I noticed: A realistic story of SA (check) A satisfying revenge story (check) A gory bloody-tastic ending to George (check) ...
Jun 15, 2023 -
Re: the yellow alarm clock
Quick review since I have to study. Cute names, Galaxy and Indigo. If you think of it, the color indigo is quite prominent in the color of some galaxies. I ...
Jun 14, 2023 -
Re: what a haunting stomachache, i wonder who it misses right now
Even though this is a random spiral, it shows one the inner depths of a person's line of thought and it brings different kinds of interpretations and possibilities. If you've ...
Jun 13, 2023 -
Re: Umbrella
Good day/afternoon/night! I'm here to leave a short review :D First Impression: I thought this was a cute story, even if it had more melancholic undertones than joyous ones. I ...
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Re: Flight for Two
Hello! A quick review from me :) First impression: When I first read this, I can see the tension between the narrator and the girl, who became the person he ...
Jun 11, 2023
