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Re: I, too, hear America
Hello! I am not American nor have I read the poem you suggested but I shall review this all the same because why not?! Pardon the alpaca, it has gone ...
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Re: Reflecting Hearts - Prologue
The alpaca barged in to review your work The alpaca is astonished. Alright. This is deep. Let's review it. Overall Impression: At my first read (or scan rather), I saw ...
Jul 24, 2023 -
Re: Time & Space (Extra: 2/2)
Hello!! And to the graaandd finale of the bonus chapter of Time and Space! I'm very glad and satisfied with the ending because somehow you tied up some loose ends ...
Jul 24, 2023 -
Re: Time & Space (Extra: 1/2)
Well well! It looks like we had the same thing in mind for that last bit from chapter 5. Of course a sequel or a redemption arch was in store. ...
Jul 19, 2023 -
Re: Time & Space (Part 5/5)
This is the alpaca and I just want to say one thing before I start this review. NOOOOOOOOOO WHYYYYY DIS SO SADDD Okay, I've let out my emotions. On to ...
Jul 19, 2023 -
Re: Foxmaster- who is she really? intro
TELL ME MORE That is what first entered my mind when I read this lol The first two lines never fail to make me laugh despite how others may see ...
Jul 15, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 22.2
hello! It is me again! :D So this follows after the last chapter I read and reviewed apparently. Let's see how this will go! I believe this is the first ...
Jul 13, 2023 -
Re: De-Evolution
I really like reading poems that make you think. It is usually a fresh breath of air from its opposite, emotional or heart-wrenching poems. Not saying I don't like emotional ...
Jul 13, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 22.1
Hello elo! The alpaca has rushed in to get this work out of the green room and to also marvel at this wondrous work! I'm not exactly updated with what's ...
Jul 13, 2023 -
Re: PftPP- Chapter 2.2
Hello! It is the alpaca, barging in for a short review! I read the first two chapters of PPTP so I have a slight bit of context on where this ...
Jul 13, 2023 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 31
Hoping here right after reviewing chapter 30 so that I won't forget what happened whatsoever because I have a goldfish memory. Let's goooo Jed hesitated. His fingers dropped to his ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 30
Hello Kaia! The alpaca has popped up to review your work. This is a continuation of chapter 29, so I don't think I'm too left behind. Anyways, let's review! I ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: Re: Words can be Bullets Too
Hello! I'm here to leave another review. This is an interesting poem. Contrary to the popular yet incorrect saying "Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never ...
Jul 10, 2023 -
Re: yet the nostalgia fails to return me to my past
this poem broke my heart. quite literally. If this is based off your real life, I would like to offer my condolences first before I proceed with the review. Based ...
Jul 9, 2023 -
Re: Mr. Fog Morning Kiss
Hello! Time to leave a short review on your poignant and emotional work. Because of its brevity, I'll be able to review your poem by line. COOL! Okay, let's goooo ...
Jul 9, 2023
