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Wow this is hauntingly well done! You were able to portray the inner turmoil and horror that comes from someone that’s haunted by their reflection. You show this like someone ...

First impression: This story is very promising! I am impressed with how you write, being able to draw the attention of people with your story. I read chapter 1 first ...

Evidently, Xandra has gone through a lot to arrive at that definition of a teenager. "depressed, drug addict, alcoholic, and fake" She may be describing her friends, but the way ...

My first impression of this is that the poem gives Lion King vibes. I mean this in a positive way, this is a wonderful poem. I like how you describe ...

This poem is a wonderful example of great friendship. In my interpretation, these two friends care deeply for each other and have an even deeper bond. The narrator describes how ...

I really love this! The way you wrote it is as if the narrator is sobbing uncontrollably and gasping for air in between phrases (at least that's how I imagined ...

Hello! This poem is beautiful. Albeit short, it captures the sweetness of the moment. At the same time, it implies of something deeper. The first few lines of the poem ...

This was a wonderful poem! You questioned why love is likened to flame, an item of destruction. I believe that you structured your argument critically and lyrically. In my opinion, ...

This was a nice story with a valuable moral behind it. Many who have gone under the same experiences will find themselves relating to this story, feeling like a sore ...

The poem paints such rich, imaginative and vivid images in my mind. I applaud you for doing that. It's not easy and you've done it well here. It describes a ...

There's so much to unpack here, but you were able to establish several unsaid things in the poem. For one, the man that the narrator is talking about was apparently ...

I really appreciate how amazing this poem is! It's so wonderfully done that I had to overanalyze it HAHAHA There are many ways to interpret this poem, but I would ...

This short piece of fiction contained an incredible amount of emotion. I love how each sentence and word mattered to the story. The flow and cohesiveness of the story is ...

Can I just say that I was smiling widely while reading the story? hehe This was well written! The flow of the conversation was natural and smooth. Their actions towards ...

Hello! These are my comments. Please don't take anything to heart if some of them seem to be blunt. Hope they help :D Overall Content Comments: - You can include ...