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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You Left

    Woah, I really like the raw emotion I'm seeing in this poem. The rage, hurt, and bitterness can be felt from the screen (cuz I'm reading it on a screen, ...

    5h ago
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: fragmented

    Hello! This is a great and provoking poem. The mundane scenes evoke a sense of nostalgia with an overcast hauntingness to it. Descriptions were executed very well and truly the ...

    6h ago
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Strawberries

    This is such a great poem! It is amazing how you were able to relate two completely unrelated objects with each other and create this work. I like how you ...

    Jan 23
  • Article / Essay » Technology, Realistic Re: Photography

    Hello, fellow photography lover! Personally, photography is not my main hobby but I find satisfaction when I do snap a good photo. "The eyes are the windows to my soul, ...

    Jan 23
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Engraver

    As someone who tends to struggle with rhymes, great job on the rhyme scheme! It is quite an interesting take that you bring to the table that it isn't time ...

    Jan 23
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: What Men See

    Hello! This poem is quite resounding with the character of much men and the experience of many women today. I like how the perspective of the woman is innocent while ...

    Jan 23
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: SOME DAYS

    Hello, alpaca here! I have found myself in this kind of scenario myself several times so I guess it would be fun to read and review it! This may be ...

    Oct 3, 2024
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: When The Pomodoro Technique Might Not Work, This is What You Do.

    Hello! alpaca here It's been a while since I dropped a review but sure why not When I saw Pomodoro technique, I was interested immediately. I've developed my own system ...

    Sep 30, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: Our Love is Eternal

    Awwww this is so cuteeee! Let's quickly review it... The narrator honors his wife by calling her the light of his life. He appreciates how she goes through him in ...

    Jun 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Culture, Romantic Re: i promise one day you'll wish it hurt this little

    Hello! It is me again if you remember. You have wonderfully melancholic poems that seem abstract yet are deeply rooted in reality and I do love your style. You should ...

    Jun 6, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Sun's Answer

    With how beautiful this poem is, I would very much like to see the words that evoked this sort of response. Scientifically, the sun's light is what gives the moon ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: proposed promises you won't deliver

    these are the kinds of poems that make you read it the second, third, fourth, and fifth time, because even if there's less than 10 lines, there seems to be ...

    May 31, 2024
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Johnny the Orphanage-Burner v. The People

    Alright, it's been a while and this work has been sitting in the green room for some while, no? Let's free it from the shackles of jade and let it ...

    May 31, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Cost of Loving You

    It's been a while since I wrote a review so forgive me if this is not the most comprehensive kind. I would just like to provide some insight and encouragement ...

    May 31, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: blackout poem

    Now this is one of a kind! I haven't seen a blackout poem in this site, until now. Let me see if I get the message right. day had broken ...

    Feb 5, 2024


Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.
— George Orwell, 1984