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Re: You Left
Woah, I really like the raw emotion I'm seeing in this poem. The rage, hurt, and bitterness can be felt from the screen (cuz I'm reading it on a screen, ...
5h ago -
Re: fragmented
Hello! This is a great and provoking poem. The mundane scenes evoke a sense of nostalgia with an overcast hauntingness to it. Descriptions were executed very well and truly the ...
6h ago -
Re: Strawberries
This is such a great poem! It is amazing how you were able to relate two completely unrelated objects with each other and create this work. I like how you ...
Jan 23 -
Re: Photography
Hello, fellow photography lover! Personally, photography is not my main hobby but I find satisfaction when I do snap a good photo. "The eyes are the windows to my soul, ...
Jan 23 -
Re: The Engraver
As someone who tends to struggle with rhymes, great job on the rhyme scheme! It is quite an interesting take that you bring to the table that it isn't time ...
Jan 23 -
Re: What Men See
Hello! This poem is quite resounding with the character of much men and the experience of many women today. I like how the perspective of the woman is innocent while ...
Jan 23 -
Re: SOME DAYS
Hello, alpaca here! I have found myself in this kind of scenario myself several times so I guess it would be fun to read and review it! This may be ...
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Re: When The Pomodoro Technique Might Not Work, This is What You Do.
Hello! alpaca here It's been a while since I dropped a review but sure why not When I saw Pomodoro technique, I was interested immediately. I've developed my own system ...
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Re: Our Love is Eternal
Awwww this is so cuteeee! Let's quickly review it... The narrator honors his wife by calling her the light of his life. He appreciates how she goes through him in ...
Jun 27, 2024 -
Re: i promise one day you'll wish it hurt this little
Hello! It is me again if you remember. You have wonderfully melancholic poems that seem abstract yet are deeply rooted in reality and I do love your style. You should ...
Jun 6, 2024 -
Re: The Sun's Answer
With how beautiful this poem is, I would very much like to see the words that evoked this sort of response. Scientifically, the sun's light is what gives the moon ...
Jun 1, 2024 -
Re: proposed promises you won't deliver
these are the kinds of poems that make you read it the second, third, fourth, and fifth time, because even if there's less than 10 lines, there seems to be ...
May 31, 2024 -
Re: Johnny the Orphanage-Burner v. The People
Alright, it's been a while and this work has been sitting in the green room for some while, no? Let's free it from the shackles of jade and let it ...
May 31, 2024 -
Re: The Cost of Loving You
It's been a while since I wrote a review so forgive me if this is not the most comprehensive kind. I would just like to provide some insight and encouragement ...
May 31, 2024 -
Re: blackout poem
Now this is one of a kind! I haven't seen a blackout poem in this site, until now. Let me see if I get the message right. day had broken ...
Feb 5, 2024
