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  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: SOME DAYS

    Hello, alpaca here! I have found myself in this kind of scenario myself several times so I guess it would be fun to read and review it! This may be ...

    Oct 2, 2024


  • Hello! alpaca here It's been a while since I dropped a review but sure why not When I saw Pomodoro technique, I was interested immediately. I've developed my own system ...

    Sep 29, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Our Love is Eternal

    Awwww this is so cuteeee! Let's quickly review it... The narrator honors his wife by calling her the light of his life. He appreciates how she goes through him in ...

    Jun 27, 2024


  • Hello! It is me again if you remember. You have wonderfully melancholic poems that seem abstract yet are deeply rooted in reality and I do love your style. You should ...

    Jun 6, 2024

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Sun's Answer

    With how beautiful this poem is, I would very much like to see the words that evoked this sort of response. Scientifically, the sun's light is what gives the moon ...

    Jun 1, 2024

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic
    Re: proposed promises you won't deliver

    these are the kinds of poems that make you read it the second, third, fourth, and fifth time, because even if there's less than 10 lines, there seems to be ...

    May 31, 2024


  • Alright, it's been a while and this work has been sitting in the green room for some while, no? Let's free it from the shackles of jade and let it ...

    May 31, 2024

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: The Cost of Loving You

    It's been a while since I wrote a review so forgive me if this is not the most comprehensive kind. I would just like to provide some insight and encouragement ...

    May 31, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: blackout poem

    Now this is one of a kind! I haven't seen a blackout poem in this site, until now. Let me see if I get the message right. day had broken ...

    Feb 5, 2024

  • Poetry » Other, Literature
    Re: Home of us

    They say that less is more. This is a good example of that. In less than 100 words of poetry, you conveyed complex emotions that one would feel in a ...

    Dec 12, 2023


  • YOU'RE FILIPINOOOO??? WOOOO AKO RIN! *squealllsss* Sige magtataglish ako sa review nito. Pasensya na kung may grammatical errors ako hehe Ang aking aso, Hugo Siya ay may malaking puso Darating ...

    Dec 11, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: i try to try

    What a wonderful poem! I really relate so much to this poem. I'll be reviewing it the way I interpret it so pardon me if I make some mistakes the ...

    Dec 11, 2023

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: The Language of Rain

    The alpaca has awaken from her slumber to feel the drizzle of rain dripping down her face. She saw this work and decided to leave a short review. The overall ...

    Nov 2, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Waterjet Stories

    ALPACA COMING THROUGHHH! *crash* *cat scream* sorry cat Alright! Time for a short review! (actually this is more of appreciation and encouragement post for this beautiful piece of work) The ...

    Sep 4, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: memories you'll never feel again

    Hello! The alpaca was intrigued by the title and dragged me here. Good thing the alpaca has a good sense and I was not disappointed by this work. Far from ...

    Sep 2, 2023


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