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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: The Language of Rain

    The alpaca has awaken from her slumber to feel the drizzle of rain dripping down her face. She saw this work and decided to leave a short review. The overall ...

    Nov 2, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Waterjet Stories

    ALPACA COMING THROUGHHH! *crash* *cat scream* sorry cat Alright! Time for a short review! (actually this is more of appreciation and encouragement post for this beautiful piece of work) The ...

    Sep 4, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: memories you'll never feel again

    Hello! The alpaca was intrigued by the title and dragged me here. Good thing the alpaca has a good sense and I was not disappointed by this work. Far from ...

    Sep 2, 2023

  • Short Story » Romantic, Other
    Re: "In this moment."

    The initial reason I clicked on this short story to review it was because I remembered a sweet little piece that had the exact same title as this. "In This ...

    Sep 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Our Destined World

    Hello! The alpaca has dropped by to leave a review! ūü¶ô I'll be giving a short review for this interesting piece. When there's a poem titled "Our Destined World", I ...

    Sep 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature
    Re: Why I cannot Write

    Why can't you write when you've churned out something that is akin to the language of Shakespeare and easily understandable at the same time? If you say your writer's block ...

    Sep 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Down, Deep, Deep Down

    Good day! Came here to review your work and deliver your order of one alpaca magnet set! I apologize for the delay and I hope you are satisfied with your ...

    Aug 16, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Spiritual
    Re: ‚ÄčKeeping your eyes on Jesus/ Tunnel Vision (Essay)

    Hello!! Welcome to YWS! Glad to meet another Christian here who's actively sharing the faith. When I first saw your work in the green room, I immediately became filled with ...

    Jul 28, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Diversion

    Hello Lim! The alpaca has come to give you a review! This is a light-hearted, airy piece, quite reminiscent of the cottage core aesthetic. Let's start the review, but let ...

    Jul 27, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Goodbye My First Car

    Awww nooo! That's so sad :( Although I don't have a car yet (this fact betrays my age doesn't it), I understand how much cars can mean to certain people, ...

    Jul 24, 2023

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: after the storm

    Hello! The alpaca has barged in another Green Room work to give a review! This poem is really pretty from its structure to its rhymes. Let's go review! Also, I'll ...

    Jul 24, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: I, too, hear America

    Hello! I am not American nor have I read the poem you suggested but I shall review this all the same because why not?! Pardon the alpaca, it has gone ...

    Jul 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Reflecting Hearts - Prologue

    The alpaca barged in to review your work The alpaca is astonished. Alright. This is deep. Let's review it. Overall Impression: At my first read (or scan rather), I saw ...

    Jul 24, 2023

  • Short Story » Narrative, General
    Re: Time & Space (Extra: 2/2)

    Hello!! And to the graaandd finale of the bonus chapter of Time and Space! I'm very glad and satisfied with the ending because somehow you tied up some loose ends ...

    Jul 24, 2023

  • Short Story » Narrative, General
    Re: Time & Space (Extra: 1/2)

    Well well! It looks like we had the same thing in mind for that last bit from chapter 5. Of course a sequel or a redemption arch was in store. ...

    Jul 19, 2023

gonna be honest, i dont believe in the moon
— sheyren