almurs13

Wow! Seriously this is perfect. I'm really impressed with this piece. It's so great that you turned something that seemed so ordinary to us into such a good poem. I ...

IT'S SO INCREDIBLE! I love this! I can relate so much to it, it's literally me right now. I've always wanted to write a piece explaining just this and now ...

I'm in love with this poem. I don't see one single flaw in it. I love the way it's written and the fact that it rimes. Reading the first few ...

Hey! You have written a very sentimental and beautiful piece. I really like it because I can relate to it. I like the way the poem evolves and how each ...

I think it should definitely be a novel! It very interesting and I could tell I would have a great plot. You grabbed my attention with the first sentence, it's ...

Hey! Here to review. I really liked the idea of this poem and the way repetiton is used (sometimes, rarely, always, never), it's BRILLIANT. Sometimes, "I reach up to the ...

I have to say that I definately wasn't expecting the ending, but it's perfect. I am awestruck by your use of vocabulary and the way you really get the feelings ...

Fantasy expressed in such a magnific manner. It's beautiful and concise. I love the way you have described fairytales and stories, it really is incredible. We writers live in a ...

I MIGHT STEAL THIS POEM! IT'S ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! I'm kidding, I won't steal it but I do have to say that I will read it once in a while. I ...

WOW. I'm already caught up on the story! I love how it starts with drama in the first few paragraphs. It's BEAUTIFULLY written, not too complicated and uses great vocabulary. ...