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Great job! I loved the metaphors in it and how your narrator's voice really shone through. It was a very unique idea, and I thought the story was really good. ...

Great job! This story really puts you in the shoes of the mother who is struggling so much with the child. There was only one thing that I would change: ...

Great chapter! I'm really enjoying the story, especially with the flashbacks at the end. It almost feels more is falling into place each chapter. Just a few fixes: 1. Pain ...

I'm hooked! Great descriptions! I loved the opening line about the sun. I just had a few things that I would change: 1. “I just wanted some extra money!” she ...

Loved it! It was really cool how you started out strong and it didn't get boring. I was just wondering a few things: 1. Why doesn't Toby want to go ...

Amazing! This is definitely one of my favorite poems on here. I loved the structure, rhythm, and rhymes. Overall, it had a creepy feel to it especially with the paragraphs ...

Great start! I really liked the characters and how it shows a problem that people can relate to. There were just some things that I would have changed. 1. Narration: ...

Wow! Such a unique idea. Love poetry is written about a lot, but this was a new take on it that I like. The metaphor comparing it to a fire ...

Great job! This poem is so true, and it had a really strong ending. I loved how the whole poem was a metaphor, and how the speaker has perseverance even ...

Wow! Great poem! I liked how it rhymed, but it had a good flow too. The meaning really sticks after you read it. There were just a few things that ...

Good essay! I think the issue that you are talking about is very important, and it was good to read. Maybe you could put a bit more numbers in so ...

This was beautiful. I loved the last stanza especially. It was very powerful, and I liked how you coupled the favorite color being blue with the father looking up at ...

Great job! It started and ended strong. I especially liked the part that said, "The house on Laurel Hill will always exist. Even when everyone has moved away." This page, ...

This poem did a very good job of describing anxiety. The rhyming was great, and the word choice was nice. You get a good idea of the point the poem ...

I really liked how this was made. It advises you what to do and what not to do, so you get a good idea on what the Etherworld is. All ...