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Re: denial through the lens of grief
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hi, it's Aaliyah! Super excited to review this work for you. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is ...
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Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 1: Trial One
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hi, this is Aaliyah! Very excited to review this work for you today. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know ...
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Re: the end of the world and every time the world has ended
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I'm so excited to get started. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is a realistic short story that ...
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Re: Loving Your Shadow
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello my fellow writer :3 this is Aaliyah Laurier and I can't wait to see what you have to offer!!! ...
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Re: Anguish [Ch. Ⅱ, Old Prey]
(Hello talented dearest! My name is Aaliyah Laurier, author of "Candy - A 21st Century Queer Narrative for Mentally Ill Teenage Girls")! I'm excited to start this review. Top Graham ...
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Re: Rotten - L.A. - Prologue
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! (Hello, I'm Aaliyah Laurier, a fellow writer, and I'm excited to review your work.) Top Graham Cracker - What I ...
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Re: Chocolate Chips as a Means of Fixing Friendships
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello! I'm Aaliyah Laurier, a fellow writer, and I can't wait to review this poem for you. Top Graham Cracker ...
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Re: Your trauma made you stronger.
Wow this is so real. I love this so much. This is the perfect poem for kids who have been parentified/forced into adult situations at an early age. I always ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race: The Hidden Truth - Chapter 17
You are so extremely talented! I was drawn in from the start, and now I want to go back and read everything from the very beginning. I'll have to set ...
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Re: Jane and Mary’s greatest gift
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Feb 11, 2024
This chapter dives deep into the emotional turmoil and intense conflict faced by the protagonist, Jane, as she confronts her tormentor, Jeff, in a gripping showdown. Here's a detailed review: ... -
Re: Reign of the Crimson Plague ~ Chapter 2
- The chapter opens with a captivating scene set in a bustling village, instantly immersing readers in the protagonist's world. - The protagonist, Alister, demonstrates a palpable yearning for adventu
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