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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: denial through the lens of grief

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hi, it's Aaliyah! Super excited to review this work for you. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is ...

    Apr 3, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 1: Trial One

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hi, this is Aaliyah! Very excited to review this work for you today. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know ...

    Apr 3, 2024


  • Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I'm so excited to get started. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is a realistic short story that ...

    Mar 18, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Loving Your Shadow

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello my fellow writer :3 this is Aaliyah Laurier and I can't wait to see what you have to offer!!! ...

    Mar 15, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic
    Re: Anguish [Ch. Ⅱ, Old Prey]

    (Hello talented dearest! My name is Aaliyah Laurier, author of "Candy - A 21st Century Queer Narrative for Mentally Ill Teenage Girls")! I'm excited to start this review. Top Graham ...

    Mar 6, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Literature
    Re: Rotten - L.A. - Prologue

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! (Hello, I'm Aaliyah Laurier, a fellow writer, and I'm excited to review your work.) Top Graham Cracker - What I ...

    Mar 4, 2024


  • Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello! I'm Aaliyah Laurier, a fellow writer, and I can't wait to review this poem for you. Top Graham Cracker ...

    Mar 4, 2024

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: ​Your trauma made you stronger.

    Wow this is so real. I love this so much. This is the perfect poem for kids who have been parentified/forced into adult situations at an early age. I always ...

    Mar 4, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: The Forsaken Race: The Hidden Truth - Chapter 17

    You are so extremely talented! I was drawn in from the start, and now I want to go back and read everything from the very beginning. I'll have to set ...

    Mar 4, 2024

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic
    Re: Jane and Mary’s greatest gift

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    This chapter dives deep into the emotional turmoil and intense conflict faced by the protagonist, Jane, as she confronts her tormentor, Jeff, in a gripping showdown. Here's a detailed review: ...

    Feb 11, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Reign of the Crimson Plague ~ Chapter 2

    - The chapter opens with a captivating scene set in a bustling village, instantly immersing readers in the protagonist's world. - The protagonist, Alister, demonstrates a palpable yearning for adventu

    Feb 11, 2024


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