Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!
Hello my fellow writer :3 this is Aaliyah Laurier and I can't wait to see what you have to offer!!!
Top Graham Cracker - What I Know
This seems to be a poem about losing someone you love, which is among the most painful things another person can experience. I'm deeply sorry for your loss.
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - Room for Improvements
I'm going to be very honest and say that this is one of the most beautiful poems I've read on this site! Not very much room for improvements, if at all. It captures the feelings of loss perfectly, and I'm going to see if you have any other works published.
Chocolate Bar - Highlights of the Piece
The third paragraph is my absolute favorite. It was hard to pick, but I resonated with that one the most.
Closing Graham Cracker - Closing Thoughts
Thank you so much for reading this review. You are extraordinarily talented. please keep up the good work.
Points: 38
Reviews: 10
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