aaboo17

I love stories like these. Cute couple romance, reminds me of my boyfriend. Anyways, the story paints a picture the your readers mind, which is what you want. I could ...

I don’t like being a critic but to start off there are some spelling errors. Captain instead of caption. Your chapters seem a little bit short to say the least. ...

This is great start to a book or story. It's mysterious and keeps the reader wanting more! I like the idea you have going for with the plot of this ...

Hmm. This story is very interesting. Though I'm a bit confused with the (~~*~~). I'm seeing the word Cole a lot as well. I like your imagery you have going ...

You have very good imagery. It really paints a picture into the readers head, and that's what you want. But honestly, the story is a bit all over the place. ...

After reading all about the Holocaust, books from different people other that true survivors upset me. Though I like your idea. I'm just VERY skeptical when it comes to this, ...

Wow, such an amazing story you have going on here! At first I thought they had captured him again but didn't. The bird, I take it is sort of an ...

This story is amazing! Absolutely amazing. You give such incredible imagery, letting the reader picture what's going themselves. I really like the idea of the old man being with the ...

MORE. MORE. MORE. I'm really liking this story! You describe it in such great detail. We finally know the name, Riley. I like that name. Can i say, GREAT ending ...

I loved this!!! Though I would say make it a little bit longer. Michael? You put it as they are friends. Yet we don't know much about Michael or them ...

I like the whole angel theme you've got going here. You see rarely few people can pull it off, though i think you could. I like it so far yet ...

Honestly, i like it. Reading chapters one and two. It really goes well with what you've wrote so far and the characters come together so well. If you're looking for ...

Like everyone else, I won't nit and pick at the story. It does seem to be a bit fast-paced. In the beginning it seems all happy go lucky. A sister ...

It seems to be a bit all over the place. Going from person to person, could eventually confuse the reader. If you wanted to show different peoples side of things, ...

MORE! MORE! I actually like how this story is going. You've started it off with a mystery, pulling the readers in. Quinn seems very uneasy yet her partner Blue seems ...