ZombieSquirrel

I would pay for that if it were on a shelf, I don't read ever romance stories (I mean ever) But I was enthralled by the imagery, just plain beautiful ...

I really enjoyed it, I have a short attention span so short stories tent to appease my aggrovated creativity itch. I loved the imagery in I think it was the ...

Wow! I can't write them to save my life! Wish I could... This was a brilliant piece, you have serious talent when it comes to Description, I really felt "Running ...

"Forced to mistrust all good intent, He wistfully flies aloneThis battered soul in slow descent, Starved to skin and bone" I can't rememer ever writing something remotely as good as ...

Wow mate...Just wow, I was genuinely moved, it made me think of underground caves, giant eyes, and massive storms, Incredible is a pretty adequate description. Great imagery and masterful flow, ...

Ok, first of all...BLOODY BRILLIANT MATE! There is always new concepts and combinations to try, and I can't believe it never crossed my mind to do something like this, especially ...

I really enjoyed it! Short and sweet, to the point, if I had to nit pick it would of course just be that you didn't capitalize at the beginning of ...

I found it compelling and sad, I connected with a few comments and I loved the references and metaphors, they were very original. I did find the flow a tad ...

I really liked reminded me of night time walking through the streets, It was calming, I really enjoyed it and I thought the flow stood out as the biggest highlight ...

I'm so sorry for you :( I know the feeling all too well. It is healthy to express your feelings this way. It was grabbing, and kept my attention long ...

I loved it, I really can't nit pick at all, it was simple and fun to read, I read through it several times and I thought very highly of it, ...

First of all; Great job, awesome imagery and good atmosphere, excellent use of words and sentence structure. Second; I two am curious as to the title, I have never heard ...

First of all, I am JELOUS! I wish I had written that hahahaha xD "Ecstatic, expansive eyesightwatching over every soul,uplifts spirits and grants smiles." That part leaped off the screen ...

I definately agreed with Steven, I read through it about five times, each time something different popped out to me, it was fascinating, and made me want to write like ...

Mate, that was incredible, made me want to quit writing xD hahahahahahaha. If I could make just a few comments, I noticed a few minor misspellings, and I think on ...