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I'm so sorry for you
I know the feeling all too well. It is healthy to express your feelings this way. 
It was grabbing, and kept my attention long after I finished, great work
Hey i am Steven and this poem is special! It makes me feel as if it is me from my own personal exsperiences. The confusion, the hurt and the pain of the indervidual is there. It is everything i had felt in words and to et all of that in and beign able t owrite it the way you have is very very good. I hope you write more poetry as i look forward to it, hoping it is of the same standard as this piece or even better!
Keep Writing Please!
Ste Smith
good poem for close friend.I really like it.
keep writing,because i wish to see more from you!:)