Published November 15, 2011
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WOW! I'm stunned. That,my friend,is a REAL modern literary piece. I like the imagery, the theme. . .or let me say, the whole piece.
I definately agreed with Steven, I read through it about five times, each time something different popped out to me, it was fascinating, and made me want to write like crazy, it was like: War, Love, and Grief all jumbled chaotically together and yet they work so well together. It was very entertaining and emotional, great job. You could really go places with talent like that.
Heyyyy i am Steven and i really enjoyed your piece. I really think you achieved what you set out to do and can take great pleasure from what you have achieved. The imagery is simply fabulous, i wish i had the same ability to create such a strong image i nthe readers head. I cannot wait to read some more of your work as this was jsut fabuous. No real problems or errors, jsut a devine piece of writing.
Keep Writing
Ste
L-O-V-E I-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!