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Re: Does wisdom make you strong?
Heya! I am the ZombieSquirrel and this Is my opinion: We’re not supposed to lie, cheat or steal. But, for some people these things are far too real. What about ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: It Starts With Heavy Metal
First of all. Awesome to meet a fellow Metal Head! I wont gush but I just wanted to say how awesome It Is to see another Metal fan writing :) ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Shatter me, Break me
Hey mate! I am the ZombieSquirrel, and I will be your critic for the day :D Firstly, I thought the mixture of emotions created a realistic feel to the flow, ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: An Angel's Omen
Damn mate, your talent is scary! Flow, grip, power, sophistication, this had it all. I also loved the title: "An Angels Omen" So profound! Utter brilliance mate, I can't really ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: you too will turn to dust, one day
UNNNNNNNNBEEEEELLIIIIIIEEEEEEVVVVAAAAABBBLLLLEEEEEEE! That was so awesome I really can't believe it! I am a poet and Lyricist, and I can honestly say that you stomp on whatever talents I thought I ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Maple Born
Hello and welcome to a review with ZombieSquirrel (Crowd cheers) stay as long as you like :) So i'll start by saying I found this intruiging, when I glanced the ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Shameless
Impressive, good imagery, and some clever metaphors in there aswell. I did think it was a bit short though, this proves to be my biggest gripe, just because I was ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Because No One Loves an Ugly Girl Forever
Wow. In every stanza I found something to love, it just bristled with brilliant lines I wish I had come up with. Reading this was like the equivalent of getting ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Labyrinth of Days
As a fellow passionate lyricist, i'd be happy to share an opinion :) First of all, I loved the flow, I felt like I was walking along side this protagonist ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Heart-To-Heart
I really liked it, good flow and dialogue, I think there were a few un essential lines here and there, but not nearly enough to ruin the experience. I really ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Another Bullet in my Heart
Mate, that sounds sick! I listen to songs like that all the time, and this blows away the competition! It had all the major emotions: Anger, Sadness, Madness, all the ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Death
I really liked this...Perhaps it's the relatible context...Or the similar approach to morbid subjects that I use in my writing, probably both...I am really sorry to heart of this loss, ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
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I am in love with the second and fourth Stanza's, they radiate creativity, I have never heard such a unique and beautiful way of desribing a smile, it made me ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Atmospheric Soup
I'm not sure which I enjoyed more: The intelligence of the poem...Or the unusual subject matter, this was a very entertaining read! Thank you for daring to go somewhere new ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: The Jagged Tattoos of Regret
The entire second Stanza was mezmerizing! Your vocabulary is astonishing. The rawness of the emotion works so well with the refined craft of the rant, it's like the Yin and ...
Nov 18, 2011
