Zeno

Hi, I'm here to leave a review. My heart was pounding so loudly and irregularly, I thought it would jump out of my chest and fall to the ground, bound ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a review. The first 5 years of my life flew by fast. It felt like time was racing itself once again, I knew, I'd soon ...

He couldn’t see clearly at first, but after a minute it cleared up. To his horror, he discovered that his eyes made a plastic creaking noise when he looked around. ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a review. "This sucks." said Maddie. "Charlotte, if you could-" "I've just been stabbed, honestly, do you think I can free you right now?" Charlotte ...

Hi! I'm here to leave a review. What a masterpiece! This is an amazing story/metaphor about self-obsession and vanity. The plot was well written, and the imageries used were perfect ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a review. Charlotte thought for a moment, then it hit her. "OUR MAGIC!" she yelled, and summoned fire to her hands. She zapped it on ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a review. Now, here I stood, on the rooftop of my school at 11 pm, leaning over the edge. A light wind breeze blew past ...

Hi, I'm reviewing your work again. She knew. Oh, yes, she knew. It was a very dark feeling, one that only came at a time of great loss. Yes, she ...

Hi! I saw your review on my novel. Thanks for reviewing :) "Ohhh right, you're from another world," said Maddie. "I forgot about that. you see... so. Back in the ...

Hello, it's me again This was an amazing follow up from chapter 1! The chapter length was good, and a lot of improvements have been made. "Charlotte, won't you take ...

Hello! I have many insights about this piece, both good and bad. Let's begin with the good ones. First of all, the word choice you used is wise. It is ...