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Re: The Marrilian Chapter 1 – The QSDD Interlude
Okay hello there fellow Aley :3 I shalt give my grain of salt on this so... let's jump right to it. Disclaimer: This is going to be a short review ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: Think Twice
Hellooo ello :3 Me is here to review your prose Alice o3o Let's being with pointing how you added your poetic touch to this prose. I've been reading some of ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: the last things I need to say
Uh oh. Quite the piece you've got here mate, I shalt give it a somehow short review (I'm still not good at reviewing stories :p). Really liked it. But there ...
May 2, 2016 -
Re: Slowly Dying
Hello there fellow lurker >;3 me is here to review thy work. So first of all, I liked the topic you decided to abound about. Sadly, it's extremely over-used, thus ...
May 2, 2016 -
Re: All the World's a Stage
Hello ello there fellow :v I'm here to review thy work :3 First of all, title. "All the World's a Stage". Not sure why you capped 'World' and 'Stage', but ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: True Friends
Now I shalt review thy work :v Okay first things first. I liked the message, sadly, that's where the good things end. Your use of the word 'excepted' (In both ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Just Conform
Okay okay. Very interesting, I shalt review it o3o. So this is a rhyme less poem, which isn't bad. Making this kind of poems can be tricky since, as you ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: if i were a color
Hello hello :D I am here to make a rather small review about thy poem o3o First of all, I loved it! :D Awesome piece of work, I can make ...
Apr 21, 2016 -
Re: Under A Moonlit Tree
Okay okay. I'm here to review thy story :v Very clever one, for real. First read I accidentally skipped the last paragraph and thought this was about a person suffering ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: I am my own Wife.
Hello there :D I'm here to review thy poem :v Okay first of all. Awesome. Very well written and the message it's deep within its own context. I really liked ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Why did he do this?
AYe hello there :D First of all, really liked it, this poem is a story, and a very well narrated one, as each verse before the end gives a small ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter IV
Hello Alice, it's me right here, once again to review thy work :v Well I'm going to start by saying 'wow', I love this chapter, not because of the plot ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: the youth of today
Hello hello :D Welp I guess I should start by mentioning that this is a very powerful poem. The message itself is something that most 'adults' ignore, usually damaging teens ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter III
Hello there~ I recently started reading this story and I must say I'm hooked. The essence itself of the story, although very used, you have managed to push it through ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: x - warnings
Okay so so. Now I shalt review thy poem :v First of all, I think it'd be good to start by mentioning how I admire the decision you made regarding ...
Apr 8, 2016
