Yuriiko

hello there! I liked your lyrics because you showed your feelings and emotions to it. But one thing that distracted me while I was looking down at your lyrics is ...

Hello crescent! I liked your story. It was short but sweet. For me, the rose actually made sense in the story. It was nice how you symbolizes the rose and ...

Hey there!! I loved the flow of your poem, the beginning till the end. I also liked you poem because you ryhmed well and nice. Loved it how you describe ...

At first, just by looking at your title I remembered the song called "Who Am I?". Anyways... Hello there! Your starting point was good but I was lost at the ...

hahahha! That was epic. You just made my day. I tried singing it once and it was really funny but just one thing, sometimes the lyrics doesn't rhyme with the ...

Hello there! I love your work! It got me thrilled from the beginning until the end. :wink: You have some talent you know. You described well the atmosphere and the ...

Hello there and Welcome to YWS! Is this your first submitted work? Well, as what others have stated above, your story didn't fit well with the title. I like the ...

hello there, Blue! Your poem's short and you really have to make it long because it seems that you left it hanging! :o In that little burst little burst of ...

The only thing that makes this disturbing for me is the misspelled word: "Ainlessly", it should have been "Aimlessly". This a a 3-stanza poem, short but nice, in a way ...

You actually made a good start. I like the concept of your poem. I like how you describe the situations and how you felt the experience in there. And I ...

ahahah! nice! and I like the second paragraph wherein the guy just suddenly out-of-nowhere appeared to her! really good and I can't find a single mistake to it... hmmm?? it's ...

wow.. i like the concept of the poem. How you state the colors to small meaning to big. Keep it up and as you can see,you could go to deeper ...

Nice one. Will Lily Die?? And does Abigail have something like feelings for Andrew?? I liked the story which includes the characters, different perspectives, how you describe their feelings towards ...

I liked how you kept your poem simple but sweet. But there's just one problem in you poem and it is how you rhyme them. For the first stanza it's ...

First of all, welcome to YWS, mary! Hope you enjoy being an aspiring writer.hehe. :D If this is your first piece- I would like to say that you did a ...