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hi yelloworchered! just want to say that i really like your piece of work. it is short and simple but holds a lot of depth in the words. it shows ...

HI sierradawn2016!!!!!!! being a teenager myself i can totally relate to this and the crisis's that we go through. your'e poem generates the conflicts and dilemmas that typical teenagers go ...

HI pancake and waffle!!! interesting name....anyway i like your poem but you need to fix a few things. first i kind of get what you are trying to convey but ...

hi rubykae! i like your poem because you have a great choice of words and similes. you make your hand beautiful in a very different way. it is not like ...

Hi mialynire!!!!! i love your poem. You have an excellent use of words and you built up a poetic conversation structure smoothly. the content is near adultish but gives a ...

hi eros just want to say that i like your modification. i sing this to my nephew all the time but your modification just got me thinking. does Mohit mean ...

HI Jessiebear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like your piece of work because its short and simple but creates a image of yearning. There are a few spelling mistake and i feel the wording ...

Hi SnazzyPencil! Cool name! just for the record that was a funny, cute poem. i don't know if you meant a tinge of sarcasm or it's just me but you ...

Hi Green tulip! I really like your poem. i think a lot of children can relate to it. what i can understand through the poem is a child goes through ...

Hi hadj! i really like your poem so i came back and re-read it. i love the way you format our poem in a specific order from character to style ...

Hi Taylor! ok so i'm new but i really like your poem. it has lot of depth and i love the comparison.(especially the pun). there is a variation in thought ...