Yazi

Thanks for reviewing my piece and I'm here to return the favor! :) Hi! This is an interesting take on high school life, I like that you wrote this in ...

Yazi here for a review! :) Let me start by saying wow! You use repetition skilfully in your poem, it is well executed and adds the emphasis you want to ...

Okay, so here's my review :) I think in general there is a discord between your tenses and so it makes it a little hard to follow. Though I agree ...

Hi! Yazi here to review :) I'm going to start by giving you feedback on the poem in general then I will start the nitpick. First of all I'd like ...

This is quite an impressive poem, and I like the idea that you are trying to convey and I especially appreciate how you use the rose as a running metaphor ...

Hi! Yazi here to review :) So I want to start off by saying that it might have been better if you posted the first chapter first. Since you started ...

Hi, Yazi here once again to review! :) Again, sorry I'm so late. I loved your story, it got me reminiscing about my own similar experiences. If this depicts your ...

Hey :) Yazi here to review as requested! I'm so sorry it took so long though, it's been a hectic week. Shall we get to it? Okay, I will start ...

Hi! Yazi here for a review :) Let me start by saying that "Thoughts" is an interesting idea that you've had and I'm glad you've explored it. Okay, now the ...

Hey :) Yazi here for a review! Let me start by saying that I hope it does develop into a novel because the theme you are exploring is definitely an ...

Hi hi! Yazi here to review :) This poem made me laugh because I've never read anything like it. It was so random and so original and that's what I ...

Hi there Sushi! :) Yazi here to review for you! It's been a while since I've reviewed so please bear with me. Alright, so this is so far my favorite ...

Hi Sushi! :) So this is my review! I'd like to start by saying that I really like the title change, it's more appealing to a ready than "elementals" and ...

This was so sweet, it made me smile :) I definitely like your poem, I think the literary devices you used were clever and the associations you make to everyday ...

So many unanswered questions indeed :p I really liked the poem but I am a bit confused about what death and survival has to do with the confusion of life. ...