Yanni1995

Oh my gooseneck! Panic attack it is. Seriously, at the beginning I thought it was about something serious and then you went and said “I’ve never seen a panic attack, ...

Nanya! Alright! This is an awesome piece. You're using words that aren't that often heard or even seen and it makes me happy to see that your vocabulary is being ...

Hello Dearest, You know me and I know you. Haha. Now I'm gonna review! So this is another one of your more dramatic pieces and somehow I think that you ...

First off, I would like to commend you on a job well done. This is a really emotional poem and I can feel everything that you're trying to convey; there's ...

Doxie!!! I swear you have a talent for writing poems. I absolutely adore this one. I just hope she can read this so that she knows there are people who ...

First off, I'd like to say that this is a cute poem. I really love the story behind it. Secondly, I'd like to say that the form of your poem ...

Wow! I mean, yeah, wow! This is a scarily accurate work. The title is definitely appropriate. I didn't really find anything that was wrong with it grammatically aside from a ...

First off, this is rather cute. Now, onto the comments. My name is pochahontas, -Pocahontas I sing every thing I say . I constantly have drug induced delusions. Like talking ...

Delilah had always liked Manhattan. She remembered her first time visiting in short bursts of clarity; blinding lights against the dark sky, illuminating the night; a rat, with squinty black ...

WOW!! you're absolutely right!! he is a genius... I absolutely loved it although I was a little disappointed by the lack of punctuations but this is just beautiful. I did ...

This is a beautiful poem. However, I did find some mistakes and would like to point them out. The night sky expands over the world below , Everywhere the stars ...

This is a really great poem. I didn't find many mistakes but I would like to point out those that I did. Alcohol is the nectar of the gods. Well, ...

Another job well done. However, mistakes, I've found them again. Anyway, I think some, or most I don't really know, are made due to carelessness. But then again, that's why ...

Awesome poem. Now, I would like to correct the mistakes. I know your afraid , -comma for pause and dramatic effect. I see you. Curled up behind that mask , ...

Beautiful poem. Now, I'm here to correct mistakes. I was only a young girl When you where taken to hospital - 'where' is pointing to a place, you mean 'were' ...