Soundless noise

Nanya!

Alright! This is an awesome piece. You're using words that aren't that often heard or even seen and it makes me happy to see that your vocabulary is being used appropriately.

I love it. It's very descriptive and it literally paints a picture in my mind. I understand what you mean with everything and I know that somehow this piece was very inspired.

Kudos to you!

Yanni

Hello nanya,

I'm RavenLords to give you a stupendous review on your poem.

The word choices in this poem are fantastic. You use so many cool words that you don't hear very often, that is really cool to see in a poem.

In every phrase, there is an adjective describing what you are talking about.

"That achieves resonance

And flows without utterance

Giving a peaceful melody

That brings forth serenity."

Were are the verbs in that?

Well anyways other than that I loved your poem. It was descriptive, and it rhymed.

Enjoyed Reading
RavenLords

"Giving a peaceful melody

That brings forth serenity"
- Peaceful melody? I can hear the melody, so soundless kinda defeated the poem. But your word choices are good. I can feel, and hear everything your talking about.

"The peaceful silence

That refutes science,"
- That sentence is just freaking awesome. The word refutes is so different, but it fits in this poem.

"A dying person’s faith

An epitome of grace,"
- Word choice again. Your words are astonishing. I haven't seen words in poems like these. GrEaT job.

In all your poem is A+ ! Keep up your awesome word choices, and poetry. Good luck!