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Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 1.1
I would like to thank you for your review. I am also going to remark that the lack of contraction is simply a mannerisms of the Khajiit. All of the ...
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue
Thank you for your review. I really do appreciate it. I will address the errors that you found with my story but I would also like to speak with you ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: I Am With You
Thank you for taking the time to review. It took me a while to get a message to the artist but after they agreed to this I was so happy ...
Jul 6, 2016 -
Re: Another Zombie Novel Chapter 1 part 1
Did you really just copy the entire story and post it in your review?
Jul 1, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.2
Remember the beginning of Chapter 2: Load Up? Jerry was shooting at glass bottles with a pistol in a field. On top of that, he is using a shotgun most ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 5
Believe it or not severe damage to the jugular can kill a person in thirty seconds. That's all it takes. So that is why Jake and Jane died so quickly. ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 4
I wanted to say something on your mention of Jerry's Psyche. The thing is that when people go through a trauma they usually do one of two things. They deal ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 4.1 - No Going Home
Will do.
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne ~ Chapter 4.1 - No Going Home
I am going to hold you to reading the other chapters and commenting. There is a lot left in this story. Jumping in part way with any story is an ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1
Thank you for your post. Believe it or not. A lot of the spacing issue is from the paste into this site. My original actually has that first paragraph separated ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1
Well...Believe it or not. This is the start of the second chapter. The first chapter is called "It Was A Perfect Day" and it goes into the initial outbreak and ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Winter's Hope
Thank you for taking the time to review my story. I greatly appreciate your feedback. I am glad that you liked the story so much. The story itself is actually ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Winter's Hope
Thanks for taking the time to review my story. I do have a thought for your future reviewing though. You should spend a little more time on things like what ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Moonlight Saga: Lost Throne - Chapter 1
Believe it or not, this is actually a first draft. I have actually done a little more with this chapter, even split it into two of them. On Re'ana, I ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: A conversation between light and dark
Glad to know that there is more to this story. I do hope that my review helped you with your experiment.
Jun 17, 2016