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Not bad. not bad at all. It has a whole lot of description. I like it.

Very Nice poem. I love it! Nice imagery.

muy interesante! Try adding a lot more detail and emphasis on words like "always' and things like it. You have something special here. Seize it. Good job! --------- -jojo

muchas gracias!( thank you very much)

thank you. That was very sweet.

awww. the pleasure was all mine. thanks for the review!

Lovely. Nice water-like-flow to it all.Nice words and meaning. Good job!

Really good. Keep on writing! You have talent...

No, it's not a terrible poem. Always be confident in your work. It think it is quite creative.

Same here. I felt like all this was going on and I was left at the metro bus stop- on the other side of the street. Nice poem and story, ...

Absolutely beautiful.Wonderful poem.

Yeah, same here. It would make a nice chorus for a song...hehehe.

Wow. Really nice. Short and straight to the point. I can't see anything wrong with it at the moment.

Whoa. Totally different. This one is much nicer. Really Beautiful. Just a few tweaks. I glance upon the shops once more, remembering the life I led within, and walk down ...

I won't go into much detail, because everyone ahead of me pretty much said everything. The ending just seemed like it was stapled onto the rest of the poem. Over ...