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Re: [deleted]
Four Words. Thank.God.For.Google. Below is a link to my search results of this thing... Please... actually write something so we can review it! Please! PLAGIARISM is so very unbecoming. -Jojo
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Why am I a Christian?
One word: AMEN! What he said. Lovely, and true piece. I'm tired of people being so soft and watering everything down. Half of them don't even know what Christianity truly ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: We All knew It Would Happen In The End
Hello, I'm Jojo! And I shall be your reviewer for today. You have sort of a reputation for doing flawless work and stuff, but I think I can actually stick ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
LOVELY WORK It just so happens that I am currently doing a report and annotating the play in my literature class in school... so I get everything in a way ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm agnostic.
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! -- Okay, I will tell you,now. I don't like this poem all too much. -- And it's not just ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
Lovely poem. Very well-written! Beautiful concept and full of truth. Everyone needs to read this. Favorite Stanza Below... Just because I'm a Christian Doesn't mean I have to turn the ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: My Messiah
Hello! I'm Jojo and i shall be you reveiwer today! Grammar is in red . Structure is in blue . Epic wins are in bold . They say he will ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Ocean Obscure
Hello! I am Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Ocean Obscure Ignorance is the black water with ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain
Hello, I'm Jojo.. and I shall......well... I really don't know.... Either way, let's get this party started... Grammar is in red .. Others are in blue. ALLAEEAAHHHOOOOOHHH! ALLAEEYUUUUHHHH! "I'm comin
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Past, The Present And The Revenge Chapter 1
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! I'll stick to structure and detail , because I can't see any grammar errors with my grammar-error-sensing-lazer-vison eyes... So... ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar
Hello, my dear swola swola! I shall be your reviewer for this fine evening! Grammar is in red . others are in blue . ~Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar~ I'm ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: bigboy
Hello, I'm Jojo ( again) and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . others are in blue . If you sprinkle when you tinkle ,(comma) ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: A Scary Moment
Hello there, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Welcome to YWS. Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . It was a cold crisp ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! *bites* 20th "Like"... My dad found Michal on his second day of searching. I’m still not sure how my ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: -Deleted-
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! I don't see any obvious grammar or anything, so I'll stick to structure for the poem review. Edits/suggestions are ...
Mar 31, 2011
