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  • Other » Other, General Re: Humans

    This is an interesting question. I believe that some people brag about pain and their problems because they want pity. I think this isn't just a selfish act, but also ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Girl

    This sparked a lot of emotion in me. I know there are people like this out in the world who are teased and threatened and then do horrible things to ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight

    This poem is very simple, though I think a lot of people feel this way. Not willing to admit that they are upset and depressed, so they'll just hide it ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: fool

    I can totally relate to this. This is beautifully written and tells the truth of mankind-egomaniacs, cynics, criminals-most of the population of humanity is explained in this piece of writing ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Lyrics » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: And then the dream comes true.........not

    Wow. Just-I wasn't really sure what to expect. When I saw the title , I thought this might actually have to do with a dream, or at least something of ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: *Untitled* Chapter One

    Though I do think that this is definitely an overused genre, I think you did extremely well writing this. However, there are a few things you can fix, or at ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Falling

    I really like this. You got your point across, and it conveyed the theme of never giving up. I think that this is a great poem and I truly loved ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Faith in Humanity = Non-existent

    Wow. Just-wow. This is beautiful. I really like this piece, because it's true. Humanity is basically a lost cause, and all we do is lie, steal, cheat, and beg. We're ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: A New Year's Contradiction

    How has this not received more views? This is so beautiful and so true! I love the idea of watching the sunrise, and I like how you made the celebrations ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Others ~NEW SERIES!~ Ch.1

    Hey there! I really loved this piece. Seems like an interesting, unique piece and I'd love to see more of it. When I started reading, I thought it would drag ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: To Our End

    This is absolutely beautifully written. I think is displays mankind well-avoiding situations, pretending everything is fine, even when it's clearly all wrong. It's the stubborn way of human kind-to ac

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: trapped

    Well, you definitely achieved what you were looking for: confusing. I think it could be taken as the "man" being "sin," and the knife he holds as forgiveness, which is ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: On Feeling Helpless

    This story kinda pierced my feels. I haven't read any of your other pieces yet, so I'm not sure who the characters are rather than what's mentioned a the top ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The Predicament of Tortured Men

    I have to say, the title lured me into the story. But this wasn't at all what I was expecting. However, I didn't see how much of a story could ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Invasion of Chocolate

    Oh my gosh I love this story! I love how you took something so random and whipped up a story about it. Better yet, you made chocolate seem evil! I ...

    Jan 30, 2015


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