Wulie

Hey - thanks guys, same you're always nice about my work :). And brad well thank you hehe. I'm not to sure I like this poem I like the theme, ...

yay thank you all :lol: you really cheered me up after my poo day :) hehe. Sam you are very cool I like this:: *Great flow. Each line kinda melts ...

Love it :) really do all gooood :thumb:

may I just say you are very welcome to your veiw and I do appreicate it but you can be very, very disheartening with your words. I do try my ...

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yeah but I'm saying whatever we say including me - we can never comprehend it. Thank you for your comments.

Cheers - I prefer it now though I still feel it needs some perfection

Thanks - it wasn't meaning to be a poem they are just my thoughts put how I see them - people can take them as they wish. I don't write ...

Thank you VERY much :) no one really likes my stuff lol, and its really nice to hear a compliment thank you!!! Merry christmas muchous love wu

Hey no worries - just read it again and I don't like it lol - yeah it is a free verse... I no good at the rhyming stuff!!! thanks for ...

Thank you muchously I wasn't offended at all its really helped me I shall try to edit it now thanks :)

Thank you muchously :) I just write how I feel never really any good but the words mean stuff to me, my thoughts written down. muchous love wu

I love it - I can relate to that poem yet I find it hard to be content. Its an amazing peom you should be very proud of it :) ...

I can relate to that poem so much... its very good

Its really good I like it muchously :)