Wulie

wow - yet another amazing poem, your last few have bored me slighlty - not to be mean but this is totally different, the flowing words, different images I can ...

I see it kind of now, but no it wasn't very obvious but thats good in some respect it gets you thinking about the poem. wu

I loved it, the words everything, nothing to be changed at all. wu

There's nothing more to really comment on this poem as it's all been said but you do have potentioal if you just wrote a little more!

Cheers sam - still not sure on it but hey glad you liked it :)!

MEH! Sorry but I have done different structed poems, no one seems to realise that look under dramatic poems. I did this one with different number of lines I didn't ...

too vague, but you have to potentional in there but you didnt get your point across at all. wu

wonderful! Powerful short snappy words vague yet so clear really god rhyming thanks for sharing it with us!!

I love this, it's yet another great work of yours yet again I have little to say as I'm pretty poo at pointing stuff out... Great ending it fades off ...

This was good though, I didn't perticually love it, it was a bit weak. As sam said I like the basic idea but it just wasn't powerful enough..

I think this may be the first poem I've read for so long the flows so well each stanza falling into each other perfect sense brought across in every word. ...

The start is much better now a little more descriptive but still portraying the idea of some one unsure of what to say!

though the point is hard to find its so well written the words sending you to their destination flowing freely and wonderfully, though I feel you may have ot expaling ...

truely amazing as every, I wished my thoughts could flow into a poem as well as yours. Your recent poems haven't failed you yet! wu

I liked and it was written very well though it didn't come across as a poem to me, and I agree it was a tad predictable. wu