WrittenSoul

Super-awesome-amazingness! Okay, I need to update my dictionary because I'm running out of words to describe your writing. It just keeps getting better and better and...yeah, you get the point. ...

Oh. WOW! That was good, and it raised so many more questions. You put so much suspense and keep me guessing as to what's going to happen next. As usual, ...

Compliments to you once again! Another excellent chapter. I didn't see any mistakes, other than the ones Venom pointed out. Oh, and I was just thinking that maybe (after thinking ...

Oh jeez! That might have been your best chapter yet! You had me on the edge of my seat once again! I'm heading over to read chapter 11 right now-after ...

Debating aside, can I direct any one's attention to the fact that Paolini first said that his books were going to be a trilogy ? Needless to say, a trilogy ...

Hey there, Cat! That was pretty good, but there were a few things I have to complain about. I'm warning you now, I'm picky with stuff, but you have a ...

Well, I read through the whole thing, and more than once I might add. It was superbly written-maybe even your best one yet! I agree with Angel, and I can't ...

That was really good! I'm trying to find errors, but it's really hard to find anything-which is good, because that means you didn't make any easily noticed mistakes, if any! ...

Actually, the name in Lord of the Rings is Moria....I think...lol Anyway, that sounded pretty good. I can't wait to see what happens in the future-your story caught me and ...

First off: Welcome! Second: Congrats! That was a very good piece of work, very nicely done. I have just one problem, but I don't think it'll be that hard to ...

I think you should go for the second one. It draws you in more than the first one-which is a good thing. It makes me want to keep reading, to ...

That was very good. I only have a couple of problems. First: Slipping like bare feet on ice, is the hot liquid falling down his throat. It doesn't sound like ...

I liked it, but I have to agree with Loose and Patience about the 'rotteness' part. It seems like it doesn't flow with the story, so maybe try changing it ...

I like it, but the beginning is pretty confusing-at least to me. I think you need to slow down and describe more, because it seems like you're just jumping from ...

Wow, that's really good. I liked how you ended it with the little cliffhanger. It makes me want to keep reading, which is always a good thing. I also liked ...