WrittenInStone

Hiyaa, the names Wisp. As Demoness had the gall to say this was a wonderful read and it did flow very nicely. I enjoyed reading it, the whole thing was ...

Hiyaa, the names Wisp and I'll be your reviewer today. The first thing that comes to mind when reading this beautiful poem is; "This is amazing". I swear, I started ...

Alright, this has potential but I do believe it needs to be fixed. "The boy you have to watch Who never shows his heart, Listens to beets, -- try ; ...

I can't tear this apart, it's too beautiful; too filled with emotion to destroy it's foundation and so I can only say that I loved each stanza and hoped that ...

Right, the name's Wisp but you can call me "Reviewer" 'cause that's who I'm going to be at the moment. First thing's first, I advise you - seriously - to ...

Hiyaa, the name's Wisp but you can call me 'Reviewer'. I've been going up and down, reviewing people nonstop. So, here goes. I just finished reading your piece of work ...

Hiyaa, call me Wisp, I'll be your reviewer today. First of all I like this poem, it's nice even though love poems are over-done and cliched, you're is slightly more ...

This is a wonderful piece of dialogue, it was very intriguing and I enjoy the whole; He fell, No you pushed him. Quite good, and the flow was nicely done. ...

Hiyaa , as many of the readers before me have stated there is quite a lot of work to be done on this story. I didn't like it mainly because ...

Hi there, I'm going to review for you - hey look - i'm a poet and i didn't even know it! Wait, no! I knew it. "... I'mm(a) scoop up ...

As with the first reader and critique-er I will have to agree that the cliched romance theme does get a tad bit over-cooked. Though I like how you displayed the ...

Haha! This little piece made my day. The way you imply the quirkiness of when you're bored and how you're desperate for something to do... well you nailed it perfectly. ...

Hiyaa, Written here or Wisp as some like to call me - I've got a perfect little review for you but since I'm short on time I'll start with the ...

Hiya, just decided to scroll throuhg some readings and stumbled across your piece here. :) I only found two little nitpicks. It all started when we moved into the Freedom ...

This chapter is very good, I do like the rewrite that you've done, it's clear to understand and I like how the emotions are very pronounced. One thing - I ...