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Hello, I will be your reviewer for the moment and I'd like to start off this review by saying that your poem is very sweet and I love the clipped ...

Hola there, Butterfly. I'll be your reviewer for the moment. (Sadly, at the moment I cannot go into too much depth due to being short on time but I will ...

Morning came quickly. (comma "and") Max lay awake listening to the sounds of the street below. He remembered how he('d) used to listen to the birds /back/ when he (had) ...

Hello there, I will be your reviewer for the time being. I would like to start of saying that I read your disclaimer and I do not believe all dancers ...

Hello there, I'm going to be your reviewer for the moment and I'd like to start out and say that I like the clipped tone to the poem. I like ...

Hello there, you can call me Wisp and I'll review this poem for you in as brief a way as possible seeing as your own work was short and sweet. ...

Hi there, my name is Writteninstone and I'll be your reviewer for today. I'd like to begin by simply saying that I don't have too many nitpicks but I'll start ...

I liked the simplicity of this poem and the structure was well done. I have seen this happen before, personally I think that even if ignorance and naitivity are still ...

Hi, call me Written and I'll be your reviewer for the time being. My first impression of this poem was a little something like this: "Whoa, a pyromancer poem, but ...

Hi, I'll be a reviewer for today; my name is Writteninstone or Wisp as some like to call me -- however today I will be critiquing this particular piece of ...

Hiyaa, my name is writteninstone and I'll be your reviewer for moment. Note - please take my advice seriously but not harshly as I do not mean any offence towards ...

Hello, I will be your ... third - I suppose - reviewer today and I would like to begin with my general impression which was the this poem has wonderful ...

Ah, hello I'll be your reviewer today so I hope you accept my review with kind-hearted intentions and without malice. My first impression of this fanfic was that it was ...

Hi there, I'll be your reviewer today. I honestly have to admit that non-rhyming poems strike me like a giant flyswater in the face, because I normally find them horribly ...

I very much liked this piece of work you've done, the narrative style isn't normally my first choice to read but I do have to say that this seems very ...