WritingWolf

Thank you so much for the spelling corrections. I understand what you mean about relationships being important too. But in my opinion, doesn't that sorta count as history? But that ...

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I was trying to let the reader come up with the reasons behind what the people are doing, and who I might be referring to, for themselves.(thats why I was ...

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Thanks! I'll try to remember that for my next poem!

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Another amazing story by Toboldygo! I must say though, I'm quite curios as to what inspired this short story. :)

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I fixed it.

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Is it just my computer, or why isn't it separating the stanzas? Please tell me if there separated on you computer; and if you know, then how to fix it ...

You did a really good job with this! I can feel the narraters desire to close the gap vary well. I don't really have much else to say. Keep up ...

Vary nice, good work Toboldlygo! I noticed the day seemed to go extremely fast, and I don't know if that was what you intended or not. It was vary enjoyable ...

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