WritingWolf

All my suggestions will be in (). A blanket of white roses A(space)drop of cherry brine, Black velvit curtain closes(,) Green grass sprouts it(at, instead of it?) the line(,) Cloudy ...

I sit and I stare, I look and I share.(share?) Nothing is real, All of it's fake.(this doesn't really rhyme) The grass of green, or the look of a wake. ...

all my suggestions are in ( ), I don't know how to spell it. My thoughts are fill(e)d with poetry, My heart is full of sound. My head is spinning ...

I don't know much about script writing, but this is all I saw, "Get back here. Don't bother that woman. I'm sure she doesn't want that woman doesn't want to ...

I will but all suggestions in parentheses, (capital F?)from afar you are ethernal(,) the Tolkien elf on stage(.) you have platinum hair(a comma and drop the "and" maybe?) and a ...

the only thing I saw was here, She swims so smooth, Not barely a ripple, Moving with grace, with beauty. When I'm looking, And when I'm seeing, I am always ...

I like it, but it doesn't say anything about the first time she ran away, and I don't think this counts as running away. Great catch sentence, good grammar and ...

""yawn" yawned Nash as she woke up", sounds kinda weird try something along the lines of "Nash yawned as she woke up." "Then she walked over to her window struggling ...

Its really good, I like it. A better catch sentence would be good(assuming this is the beginning), and I did find it hard to figure out how to say some ...