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Wow! That was really great. It really touched me and made me think. Very, very, very nice! How many petitions with underlying scars and broken hearts must you make before ...

you're a masterpiece if you can call it that anymore after swarms of followers crowd you from me and all i can see is painful camera flashes but small snapshots ...

You want to speak the truth,But you won't,Why? Are afraid of what other people will say and thik of you? But you say you don't care about what other people ...

I think this really has the potential to be good and I did like it... a lot, but it could use some work Lost I lost a friend today Of ...

I didn't really think it was that great, but it could be with some work. Why can’t we spend sentimental summers, Surfing and smiling and enjoying life? Ok, I liked ...

That was really good. Some of them spelling and punctuation bugged me, but it didn't take away from the meaning. I absolute loved your ending. It was neat and definitley ...

That was okay, I guess. To me, it didn't really have any major meaning and didn't really move me or make me think. It was hard to tell what aspect ...

Well, it was certainly interesting, but I have to agree with the others. It just didn't have a feeling. It didn't make you think or feel something. It was just... ...

I thought it was pretty good. It was definitely a touching story, but I think it could use more description to make the meaning more clear and more powerful. Also, ...

I thought that was really neat. In pain, we learn. It is very true. The rhyming was smooth which was nice. It was beautiful and short. It could use a ...