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This was good. At the very beginning, it seemed like a bunch of ramblings, but at the end you saw the point of all the words. Well done. My only ...

I thought this was really good. I loved your 4th stanza especially(not including the first line of the poem). My only suggestion is that you use some more linebreaks. The ...

This is nice and a good start. I have but one suggestion: In the beginning, you say 'It all started that fateful day' What all started that fateful day? I ...

That was cool. I think it could use some better description. Perhaps you could describe the layout of the cottage and the kind of feeling that circulated throughout the area. ...

This is pretty... here's some crit. Heroes of heart, they do not part, I don't like the beginning. The rhyming seems forced and it just does't make sense and grab ...

This was pretty. It could use some length perhaps to make it cooler, but depending on what you want this to be like, this is good There is a Land ...

Um... this was pretty and interesting, but I wrote a poem in the dramatic poetry called Death Parade ... It might just be coincidence that our titles resembled each other ...

This was nice. Here's my suggestions: The clouds are dark (I think you should start it differently. This isn't very capturing) and the rain falls black (nice description. I like ...

Hm... I think I get this and I have to say that I liked most of it. You had some very good images in the first few stanzas and I ...

I normally do not like these kinds of poems, but this one was good. The rhyming was great, simple and not forced. It just flowed ~~~~ I think you should ...

I thought it was a really interesting subject to write about and overall liked it. I don't think I can give it crit. right now 'cause I don't know what ...

This was really nice, not the best, but pretty. Here's some crit. Each time you hurt me, You riped my heart away piece by piece, I think you should bring ...

I thought this was really nice, straight to the point. I liked your description of the lady stabbing you, but I think you could go in a little deeper. Like, ...

Wow, I really, really liked this. I'm not sure why this touched me, but it really made me think. Very cool. Some of the repeating, elipse stuff didn't really bother ...

This was pretty good. Here's some crit. Is that what you wish to be? Just another face in the crowd A vivid memory erased Times wasted What was once here ...