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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: A poem Of No Understanding But Can Be Understood

    Aloha Otto. Do you know me? x3 Yesh you do. Review: First off, I loved this poem. It just seemed so mysterious and reminded me of crickets chirping and a ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Type of Jam

    Hola! :D Because I am such a dunce in the mornings, forgive me when I say that I finally figured out that the jam was supposed to be gem, as ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wrists

    Hola! ^^ I am a cutter, and I think this each time I do...except I don't do it on the wrists, because then there's the danger of dying and all, ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The First Time

    Hola Timmy! I loved this!! :D I gave it a 'like.' Anywhoooo, I liked how the last two lines of every stanza kind of summed it up, and the last ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Existence

    Bonjour! I don't speak French. ._. Anyways, I'm Cella, and I. Love. This. I had to think a little on the first line, but I just woke up (I overslept ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Who Says Boys Can't Cry

    I love this. I can totally relate to this, since I've only seen my brother cry twice in my whole life and it gives such a shock, and I know ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A New Style of Writing

    Hola and merry Christmas!! :D I love this. The lines were short, but actually not that choppy. Nice :D Like ConverseFireGirl said before, I love the lines: "Write now, And ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Grades don't equal you.

    Hola NerdFighter! Okay, so today I had absolutely no motivation to review, as today was supposed to be my lazy day, but alas, I came upon this poem. I'm a ...

    Oct 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Saturday Night

    Are you are mind reader? A seer? Or someone who stalks me? Because this is how I spend my Saturday nights, except instead of Star Wars I watch Lilo and ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hunger

    Great job with the poem!! I love it!! :D Well, I can't do a review now since Pompadour was awesome and stole my words right from my mouth. XD Okay, ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter Two

    Hi, I have just enough time to do a short review before bed. So, the first thing, is that you need to capitalize 'Mother' whenever the speaker is addressing her ...

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Science, Romantic Re: Falling For Science

    Hello! It's the wonder pus Wonder, here to attempt a review!! :D Very interesting! It's cool how you managed to mix together romance and science, which is a feat I ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Benjamin Bumblebee

    This was so cute and funny! :) It made me smile, after a pretty emit ally draining Friday the 13th. I don't believe in that, but I have to say ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Other Side of Hell

    This was a very beautiful and captivating read. It was cute, too -- I liked the ending. x3 It was very interesting as well, and it made me smile inside. ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: A Girl's Love Story: A Sweet, Tragic One

    At first I was all like, "Aww, it's a cute love story!" :3 But as I read further, I'm all like, "That guy is ****** moron...total jerk." And as I ...

    Sep 6, 2013


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