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Re: Angel Fire : Chapter I
Heyo, how do ya do, my friend? I have free period right now, so let's start this thing up! ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ But first, we must remember to be prepared for any ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 2.4 - Red Gas
*Emerges from a glowing hyper-dimensional portal Heyo, I'm feeling bored, so you know what time it is! So, this was a pretty relaxed chapter where really... nothing much happened. And ...
Feb 17, 2017 -
Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 3 Part 1: Cold Blood, Steel Fire
*Flies over on a giant eagle Hello there again! Time for yet another review, I suppose! But first, we need to drive home, and in order to do so we ...
Feb 16, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 2.3 - Red Gas
*Rises from a fissure created in the earth Hello, dear friend who happens to have a very distracting avatar! I believe it's time for a review, wouldn't you agree? (っ˘ڡ˘ς) ...
Feb 6, 2017 -
Re: Into The Quantum: Chapter One
*Emerges from an unnecessarily dramatic whirlwind of ice and electricity Hello, my fellow sci-fi writer! I am the ironically named Wizard, who has happened upon your text in my travels. ...
Feb 3, 2017 -
Re: Prologue: The Reliquary (Edited)
*Teleports in from a circle of raging fire So, I stumbled upon this bunch of text a couple days ago, and I have to say I'm very interested in the ...
Feb 3, 2017 -
Re: Hidden From Me Chapter 2
Hey, is this a review or something? I don't know. I woke up in a dark and damp dungeon and a burly guy with a big knife told me to ...
Jan 28, 2017 -
Re: Chapter Four
*Appears after several overly dramatic strikes of lightning Hey! Wizard here! Let's do a review :P So, what's good about this chapter? Well, for starters I liked the setting. Bronze-age ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Two World: Chapter 1
*Appears after several overly dramatic strikes of lightning. Heyo! I liked the prologue so I'm back again :P So what have you done well? Well, first and foremost you continue ...
Sep 17, 2016 -
Re: Two Worlds: Prologue
*Appears after several overly dramatic strikes of lightning. Hello, my friend! Welcome to YWS! There is a lot of helpful feedback you'll get from this website, and I hope that ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Suicide Note PROMPT.
*Appears after several overly dramatic lightning strikes. Hey! Wizard here, for a review! Man, I'm really sad now XD This character really hit home for me. He is very much ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: 360
*Appears after several overly dramatic lightning strikes.* Hello! Wizard here for a review! Man, this one was really cool! What I liked: You really flesh out Emma as a character, ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Neon Rust
Good job, man. You managed to set up a very intriguing protagonist, that's for sure. Awesome Stuff: The protagonist's personal relationship to the ship itself gives you a good picture ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: The Fighter of Aldea - Chapter 1 - RE-REVISED
Hello, my good lefty! This is my first review, so if you could review my review and tell me how to do better reviews that would be great :P Anyways, ...
Sep 8, 2016
