WinnyWriter

Hey there! I was interested to read this since I love hot chocolate. So my first impression obviously started with the lovely image you included. It looks so tasty and ...

Hey, there! I like how you numbered each item in this poem. It gives it a sense of structure by theme and helps keep it moving. You have taken a ...

Hey, there. Allow me to pop in for a quick review. :) I like how you used all caps to emphasize the concept of screaming. And then at the end, ...

Hey, there! At first, this poem seemed rather light, but by the end, I saw where it was intended to go, and when I read it over a second time, ...

Hey there! I haven't read any of the previous chapters in this story, but I'll try to give a little review on this one. So to start off, I do ...

Hey there! I enjoyed this piece, which has a very candid feeling. We see the narrator in a "comfort zone" of hers, alone with her thoughts. You've done a good ...

Hey, there! This is an inspiring little poem. I like how you began and ended it with the same line. My preference would be including a period at the very ...

Hey there! I really like this poem, and I certainly can relate! It's cool how you've used the line "Ah! That fear of" at both the beginning and the end. ...

I love this! The use of the Old English terms add to the humor. I love how you've made it sound like some sort of love poem, but it's really ...

Hey there! I like the idea you have started off with here. It's cool how you used the subject of chocolate as the vehicle for kicking off the story. It ...

Hey there! Here's another review from me. :p This is a lovely poem, and it has a quality that allows it to resonate with an individual's feelings. It seems that ...

Hello! Thanks for sharing your poem. It really flows nicely, and the rhyme is great. It feels like you've reached a little outside the box with this, but not so ...

Hey there! I like this poem, and it takes a fascinating and sentimental twist. From the beginning, the reader would not necessarily predict where you're heading in the ending. I ...

Hey there! This short story is great and deals with an important issue. I appreciate how you've addressed the subject in this way. My favorite part is where you've used ...

Hey there! You've given us a nice poem here. Being quite familiar with storms, I can say this definitely portrays a lot of accurate images. I like how you've started ...