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Re: Can it be you?
Hello, I'm here to leave a review. First of all, thanks for sharing this poem. It's evident that the expressions come from a heart that is lonely and longing for ...
May 4, 2024 -
Re: The Fracture
Hello, I've meandered by and now I shall leave a review! :) The way this jumps right into a scene seems to suggest that there's more to this story, even ...
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Re: Born to Touch Your Feelings
Hello! Thanks for sharing this work. The sentiment it expresses is lovely. I really like the concept of being the music that reaches a person's heart. I feel like this ...
Apr 26, 2024 -
Re: Games
Hello, I'm here for a review. The sentiments expressed in this poem appear to be very realistic feelings, so that, of course, will give it the element of relatability to ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: Memeria ~ First Pages
Hello, and thanks for sharing your story. One of the first things that is evident is that you have an interest in singing/music and in Japanese culture (perhaps you are ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The terrible life of lonely Eric
Okay, this should really be tagged in the horror genre. I do not typically read this genre; also, you might consider tagging it as such in case a reader might ...
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Re: "Too"
Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this piece. This is an interesting way to convey the idea that the narrator feels that they are too much, whether for society, a specific ...
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Re: Hair Always Grows Back
Hey, there. Thanks for sharing this. I say that not only as an appreciation for your contribution of poetry, but also for how you've shared your voice via written word ...
Jan 3, 2024 -
Re: New Novel: Chapter 1
Hey, there! I came to read, and now I review! Your tags of "realistic/narrative" are very fitting for this type of work. We get a glimpse of a more-or-less normal ...
Dec 16, 2023 -
Re: everythingwasbeautiful¬hinghurt
Hi, there! Just leaving a quick review. I like that this poem is short but meaningful. The narrator speaking to someone they love conveys their thoughts through imagination, emotion, and ...
Oct 17, 2023 -
Re: unnoticed
Hi, there! I'm here to leave a quick review. I like the idea you've got going here, that being how it would be to befriend yourself. Personally, I can't decide ...
Sep 14, 2023 -
Re: The Main Character Syndrome of Aynnhailleah Angel Astrid: Episode 1.4
I am once again here to leave a review :) This was fun to read, as it gave some more insight into what's going on overall. The ending of the ...
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Re: The Main Character Syndrome of Aynnhailleah Angel Astrid: Episode 1.3
Hey, there! I'm here for a review again. I liked this chapter (?) and found it easy to read. I have to admit, I was thinking for a minute that ...
Sep 5, 2023 -
Re: The Main Character Syndrome of Aynnhailleah Angel Astrid: Episode 1.2
Hey, I'm here for a review again! I like how you've filled this episode with various bits of what seem to be generic school drama and the stereotypical one mean ...
Sep 1, 2023 -
Re: The Main Character Syndrome of Aynnhailleah Angel Astrid: Episode 1.1
Hello! I saw one of the later parts of this story in the Green Room, I believe, and it sounded so amusing by the title. So I'm here to leave ...
Aug 31, 2023
