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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Slave Girl: Chapter 1

    Hey, there. I really like this chapter so far. It seems like you've launched a great project. One of the best things about this chapter is how you introduce us ...

    Jun 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: They Say When You're 16

    Hey, there! This is a nice poem, and I feel like it reflects a lot of the teen struggle that many people deal with, so it is highly relatable. Your ...

    Jun 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: i'm me

    Hey, there! I'm glad to see this poem. I like it. First off, I totally get the feeling of being annoyed when older people treat you in that way. Just...ugh! ...

    Jun 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Glory of the Night

    Hey, there! This is a cool poem. I like the nighttime imagery, and I feel like you've brought the reader right into the scene you're portraying. The stillness can almost ...

    Jun 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Spandex Man

    Hey, there! First thing I've got to say is, that's an awesome opening line! It's so unusual that it grabs your attention and makes you want to read more. I'm ...

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i???m more than a body

    Hey, there! Nice work with this poem. I think the point you've made reflects a truth that a lot of young people struggle with, especially when there are so many ...

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Prince Charming

    Hey, there! This is a great poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. The content is strikingly different than one would expect from the title, but it has that thought-provoking ...

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Infatuation

    Hey, there. This piece has a lot of emotion woven into it. It is undeniable that it comes from a full heart. The passion, the loss, the hurt - all ...

    Feb 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: What Dreams

    Hey, there. Nice poem here. I like the imagery you used, and the end was especially inspiring. You seemed to stick with a consistent thought pattern, which keeps the whole ...

    Feb 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 16: Realization

    Hey, there! Once again, great job!! I love the intensity of this story! It really keeps me on the edge of my seat. As usual, your writing is superb. The ...

    Jan 12, 2020
  • Other » Literature, Realistic Re: Just a thing

    Hey, there. A short, to-the-point, honest confession here. Perhaps this is the melancholy song of desperation that every writer/artist sings at some point, especially beginners or amateurs. That makes

    Jan 10, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Notebook

    Hey, there! I like this simple, yet heart-warming piece you've posted. The way you've taken something that could be overlooked or called common, and made it shine it the poetic ...

    Jan 10, 2020
  • Art » Literature, General Re: Help

    Hi, fellow writer! I saw your piece in the green room, so undoubtedly you're waiting for some reviews, so here goes. First off, you've employed some imagery that is intriguing. ...

    Jan 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: What Lies Within

    Hey, there. This is relatable, because I understand the need to just write out thoughts as they tumble out in order to conquer writer's block. Sometimes that can help, actually, ...

    Jan 9, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One my day.

    Hello! Glad to see your post here. What a cool short story! The idea behind the whole thing is very fascinating. It leaves a lot for the reader to contemplate, ...

    Jan 9, 2020


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