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Re: Slave Girl: Chapter 1
Hey, there. I really like this chapter so far. It seems like you've launched a great project. One of the best things about this chapter is how you introduce us ...
Jun 12, 2020 -
Re: They Say When You're 16
Hey, there! This is a nice poem, and I feel like it reflects a lot of the teen struggle that many people deal with, so it is highly relatable. Your ...
Jun 12, 2020 -
Re: i'm me
Hey, there! I'm glad to see this poem. I like it. First off, I totally get the feeling of being annoyed when older people treat you in that way. Just...ugh! ...
Jun 11, 2020 -
Re: Glory of the Night
Hey, there! This is a cool poem. I like the nighttime imagery, and I feel like you've brought the reader right into the scene you're portraying. The stillness can almost ...
Jun 10, 2020 -
Re: Spandex Man
Hey, there! First thing I've got to say is, that's an awesome opening line! It's so unusual that it grabs your attention and makes you want to read more. I'm ...
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: i???m more than a body
Hey, there! Nice work with this poem. I think the point you've made reflects a truth that a lot of young people struggle with, especially when there are so many ...
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: Prince Charming
Hey, there! This is a great poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. The content is strikingly different than one would expect from the title, but it has that thought-provoking ...
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: Infatuation
Hey, there. This piece has a lot of emotion woven into it. It is undeniable that it comes from a full heart. The passion, the loss, the hurt - all ...
Feb 19, 2020 -
Re: What Dreams
Hey, there. Nice poem here. I like the imagery you used, and the end was especially inspiring. You seemed to stick with a consistent thought pattern, which keeps the whole ...
Feb 19, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 16: Realization
Hey, there! Once again, great job!! I love the intensity of this story! It really keeps me on the edge of my seat. As usual, your writing is superb. The ...
Jan 12, 2020 -
Re: Just a thing
Hey, there. A short, to-the-point, honest confession here. Perhaps this is the melancholy song of desperation that every writer/artist sings at some point, especially beginners or amateurs. That makes
Jan 10, 2020 -
Re: Notebook
Hey, there! I like this simple, yet heart-warming piece you've posted. The way you've taken something that could be overlooked or called common, and made it shine it the poetic ...
Jan 10, 2020 -
Re: Help
Hi, fellow writer! I saw your piece in the green room, so undoubtedly you're waiting for some reviews, so here goes. First off, you've employed some imagery that is intriguing. ...
Jan 9, 2020 -
Re: What Lies Within
Hey, there. This is relatable, because I understand the need to just write out thoughts as they tumble out in order to conquer writer's block. Sometimes that can help, actually, ...
Jan 9, 2020 -
Re: One my day.
Hello! Glad to see your post here. What a cool short story! The idea behind the whole thing is very fascinating. It leaves a lot for the reader to contemplate, ...
Jan 9, 2020
