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Re: The Moth
Whoa, this is amazing! I am honestly in awe of this. The depth behind the meaning, the consistency of metaphors, the imagery that makes it so alive - all of ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: FyreFly - a crime/thriller pt 1
Hey, there. I haven't read this in depth, but what I did read seems to show you've got a great story underway. I like how you've left a bit of ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Our Young Fingerprints (Sonnet)
Hey, there! Nice work here. You've used great imagery, and the metaphors are inspiring. In more ways than one, I see this poem as art - not only because poetry ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: .
This is such a cute poem, and being a cat lover myself, I really like what you're depicting. Your rhyme is simple, but for a poem of such content as ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: I languish all the tide.
Hey, there! I enjoyed this short poem, and read through it twice to grasp the meaning. I like how you've depicted your thoughts as blurry. This is relatable to me ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Coffee date
Hello! This poem is so thought-provoking. I like how it isn't complicated, but it is relatable. I feel like there is something about it that many of us can relate ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: .
Hey, there! I'm glad to see a poem up with this type of content. I like how this is a simple work that evokes a feeling of peace and gratitude. ...
Sep 21, 2020 -
Re: "poetry is like pencils"
Hey, this is so creative. The format, the sarcasm, the irony - it's a work of art on multiple levels. It's interesting how you have us thinking that your comparison ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Before The Dragon (Revamp) - Chapter 1.1
Hey, there! I like how this story is going so far. Of course, we can't tell much yet from this first segment, but it sounds exciting already. You've introduced us ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: Rise of the Planet of the Chicks
Hey, there! This is absolutely hilarious, and I love it. :) Great job making it sound natural but filling it with awesome irony. Maybe this wasn't your intention, but in ...
Sep 8, 2020 -
Re: Letters I Will Never Send
Hello! This post gives us several things to appreciate. First of all, it's pretty well-written. Although it isn't eloquent, it's honest and it sounds like you're just talking to these ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Crash Landing
Hey, there! The setup and format of this poem is so creative. Honestly, that's the best part of the whole thing. It's unconventional, so it draws interest. Good work. Your ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: smell of sunshine
Hey, there! I really liked this poem. It's cute, with a light mood, but the sober feeling of deep thoughts. Comparing the sky to different foods is so creative! I ...
Aug 28, 2020 -
Re: blank
Hey, there. This is a really though-provoking and meaningful poem. I think it resonates with a lot of young females, and no doubt boys, too, so it's highly relatable to ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: out of breath
Hey, there. I saw this poem and decided to hop over and check it out. You have some interesting ideas going on. The mood is set well, so that's a ...
Jun 12, 2020
