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Re: Dirty Body
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Nov 12, 2025 -
Re: crossed lines
still killing it
Oct 19, 2025 -
Re: muzak
this genuinely means a lot, thank you so much
Aug 20, 2024 -
Re: living tomb (valentine's day is a graveyard)
i think yr most recent revision kind of narrowed in on it, but it's important to emphasize the difference between holistic vision and individual vision. as in, even if you've ...
Apr 18, 2023 -
Re: The three biggest lies on the internet
it's always too funny to see this pop up time and time again
May 31, 2022 -
Re: Theatre [edited]
Revisiting your work, and although this is very much a step up from the original, your writing has progressed in such a lovely & captivating way one year since. My ...
Jul 26, 2021 -
Re: sealing my true self in a mason jar
Hey Lim! Thank you so much for the review! You did 'grasp' most intended concepts, but your thorough insight let me know what I could articulate better. I am very ...
Jul 5, 2021 -
Re: sealing my true self in a mason jar
Thank you so much for the review!
Jul 5, 2021 -
Re: Heat Absorption Lab
buddy, in the most endearing sense, this is bonkers.
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Six One Two Five Two Zero Nine Two Zero Two Zero
Hey Haley! Thanks for your review! Not to sound disrespectful, I am grateful for the review, but if you do come across another work of mine in the future, can ...
Jun 1, 2020 -
Re: Six One Two Five Two Zero Nine Two Zero Two Zero
Hey Kahlene! Thank you so much for the review and kind words! I agree with the claims about the ending/last two stanzas. There is not a clear transition into them ...
Jun 1, 2020 -
Re: Standing In the Dark
this is just the poem
Apr 16, 2020 -
Re: 'you-rid-ih-see'
You are genuinely being way too generous, but it means a lot that you think so (and that you are back!)
Apr 13, 2020 -
Re: Your Birthday
Thank you so much for your response! To get the question out of the way, it's a coding thing. Just use ['quote]*insert text here*[/quote] with no apostrophe. It makes it ...
Mar 26, 2020 -
Re: love in the time of a bipolar diagnosis
Thank you so much!! It's been almost a year since this poem was written (yikes) and the line breaks were made visually according to how it looked on my iPhone ...
Mar 7, 2020
