Whosabell

Thank You!!! I will improve my work, and try to be better.%uD83D%uDE01

Hmm, this poem makes me very happy. It reminds me of my friends that I had at my old school. and with that I say thank you. :) I love ...

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So one mistake I cuaght is that when you said "She continues to stare after weird stranger, who limps like he just got kicked, as he saunters away, pants sagging ...

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then no more zeros misssy!!!!

I'm not sure. but i'll ask someone.

I'd like to point out you didn't capitalize you're I in you first sentence when you review...

Thank you all for your awesome reviews. I will work on my work.

This is really good, but I'm 13 so I have no room to talk, lol. I really like this story beacuase it has a great flow, an usually poems like ...

No, I'm not changing my veiws , I'm jut saying I didn't get it, it sucked. Sorry, its my opinion.

Well that was rude. I did read the story sorry I didn't get yournsucky ending.

Good, im happy someone gets it!

I get it, he's not really a drug nor is he what your in love with. And your also jelous, that Adams different, colorful, and just different then your averaged ...

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Oh my god tell me more!!! I love story's like these and the sespense and the waiting and your friends are mean! But kinda nice for doing that. So,like me ...