Wherethewindgoes

Hallo! I like the idea behind this poem. The writing suggests a lot more to this story that I can only wonder about, having to do with the narrator's sadness ...

Hallo! I like the idea behind the poem, of how electricity changes the world. I also like the first line of the last stanza, which sort of plays on the ...

Hallo! I like this poem, and I think it has a lot of potential. The idea of the mirror trying only to show us our own beauty is a really ...

Hallo! So, you certainly have an interesting story here, and it has the potential to be a really intriguing novel. A few suggestions: Firstly, formatting. It's very hard for a ...

Hallo! I think you did a very good job with this poem. A lot of the ideas expressed here are interesting, and questions that we often must ask ourselves. A ...

Hallo! So, I know this is kind of for fun, but I'll just review it like a normal poem. Firstly, I like the sort of wordplay you have here, and ...

Hallo! This is very well-written. You did a good job with the rhyme scheme, and making it seem natural instead of seeming forced. A few suggestions: Firstly, there are a ...

Salutations. I think this prologue does a very good job of hooking the reader and making them want to read on. However, there are a few things I would suggest ...

Salutations. I apologize for the very long wait. I sort of inadvertently left YWS for a little while, but now I have returned, so I have come to review! So, ...

Hallo. Firstly, I apologize for taking so long to do this review. I took a sort of inadvertent break from YWS, and never ended up completing this review. Anyway, this ...

Hallo! I have finally come to review! (I'm really, really sorry about taking this long. Because of that, I shall try to make this as amazing of a review as ...

Salutations! I have finally come to review! Firstly, I apologize greatly for the delay! I got a bit occupied, and could not find time for this, but now I have! ...

Hallo! I have finally come to review! So, some grammatical/writing style suggestions: So where do I begin? I don't think this is very good as a first line. Instead of ...

Hallo. I don't think I have ever reviewed your work before. This piece is, I must say, quite good. I am having a hard time finding things to comment on. ...

Salutations! This is very well-done. A few things, perhaps: I watched him as he removed his backpack, accidentally nudging me a lot. I would suggest cutting out "a lot", which ...