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Re: As She Passed
Hey, Weymouth here to review this because I am insanely bored at school :') I think most of it was really good, it has a nice feel to it, but ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: A Graduate's Frustration
Hey, Weymouth here for a review of this :D I like how this poem starts off with a couple of questions, but i'm not sure the second line is correct, ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: This Pen of Grace
This is...just...holy crap. I have never in my life read a more beautifully expressed, perfect poem on such a depressing subject. To contradict your note, I don't think you should ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Blood Tears
WOW. Can i just say first off before i descend into an actual review of this that this is the best poem i've read in a very long time. And ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: The Realist
Well, this took a very sudden turn to a more sinister wording quite early on, which I didn't expect at all, but I like it :D Now I have read ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: ..
Woah, I love this :O This is the first poem in a while that has actually made me really feel something. Just everything about this is amazing, I can't even ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: What would we truly be?
Hey, I'm Weymouth and I'm going to review this because i love it :D Firstly, the first stanza completely blew me away! Simply because I completely agree with that statement, ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Morning
Ooo, i like this! My favourite line is by far the first one, "The happiest moment is in the silence" as it just has such gravitas and resonance, yet it ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: the last jillionth moment
Wow, i really love this :) The very first stanza really drew me in, and those three lines are just perfect. And combined with the second stanza, it really intrigues ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Thousand Versions of Me
I was drawn into this by the title, and i can honestly say i was not disappointed! I wish i could write like this, you're really talented :) I love ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow is full of promise
Wow. This is just an amazing piece of writing, it actually really cheered me up :) I love the repetition of the word Tomorrow and how you have contrasted Today ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Whisper
I like this, it's short, but it still really gets the point across, and i also like the rather upbeat way you talk about what can be quite a dodgy ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Diesel
I like it! Really short, one sentence :) I love how yo use language to personify things, like "accuse the winter of dark designs". I also love how you've linked ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: The Differences Between the Seasons
Yo, Weymouth here for a review because i'm cool like that :) I like it, i think that your use of language is very good and the emotion expressed is ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: broken hearts can always mend
Yo, Weymouth here for a review because i'm cool like that :) I really liked this, not only because I can relate to it, but because of the perfect imagery ...
Apr 21, 2014
