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Re: The Rape of Erin Aghdra
Wow, this was really cool. The tempo and the beat type are rarely heard these days, and I really appreciated the new stuff. :), my only issue was I didn't ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Nonsense Smile
Hehe, I liked this poem a lot! And I totally agree with you on the 'serious yws writers' thing, it's very refreshing to have a fun nonsense poem once in ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: The Fruit I Was Told Not To Eat
I really like this 'paragraph'. I think it really put into perspective the whole 'forbidden fruit' thing, because Eve's situation was just like that, temptation for a thing you wanted ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Grotesque Galore
Haha! This was a very funny entry to me, a bit like a Saki piece. You had me till the very end, and I enjoyed every minute of it! Hehehe, ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: When The Strangers Came (Contest Entry)
Oh wow oh wow wow oh wow..... That... Has to be... one of the best short stories... ever..... ¡¡¡¡¡ EVER !!!!!! I loved it! I'm gunna keep it if you ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Then why do I feel like a traitor
I agree, you need something more along the story or moral line... But other than that, I kind of liked it. It was like, the drunk on the bus that ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: A fight for this world
I liked this poem a lot; a solid seven out of ten, it's just the ending that seemed a little warbled. Perhaps a syllable is missing from the ending, but ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: A Letter to Pedantic Americans
Bahahaha, tha's so funny. And true. Very true. Overlord, you must ignore the nit-picky American's who 'correct' your spelling. They are a very popular sort which I like to call ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: Dear Humans,
HAHA! I LOOVED this! Are you an Eco-warrior off the clock too? Or was this for a science paper? Either way, it's awesome how you kind of spun Mother Nature's ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Reach For The Sky
At first I didn't like it, but by the ending it was pretty awesome. I liked the theme of it, kind of reminded me of like, a bird trying to ...
Sep 26, 2010
