Way2Dawn

Amazing poem you have written you drew a picture in my head that is still there now. a few minor flaws in this piece do not keep this from being ...

A fine job on this piece you say that this was not your best poem well I want to see whats better! I have to ask who is this person ...

Wow great work writing this its quite imaginative and original. Though I have no idea what we were trying to get though in this or maybe you just want to ...

Not too sure what the exact message was in this piece though if came do to a hit or miss I would have to say hit! Then flow was a ...

Not sure that I agree with the way life if portrayed in this piece yet the emotion make this great. You say that life is a true hell though I ...

Ehh kinda short yet grand poem nevertheless. Where length has fallen short you make up in your rhymes they flow natural and true.\ Great work on this piece and keep ...

A fine poem ladyworkz The emotion you put into this piece should not be ignored nor unrecognized. The flow was well with minor bumps and all and all it was ...

Great work emotional and true. Though I have to say that I do not believe that failure is a sin rather it is the building blocks to something great. Anyway ...

Great work on the poem. It is very apparent why this belongs in this the 'Other Poetry' section. Though the strangeness of this piece may be the reason why this ...

Fine narrative poem! Sadly these simple stages of young love its almost completely accurate and have an untimely demise. Great work in this and keep writing. -Dawn

Great work on this poem justme~. I can feel the emotion when you wrote this and tip my hat to you for that. Emotional writing is the best way to ...

You give solid points in this piece and sadly most are true though I have to disagree that tears do not last as memories do. Usually memories can only fade ...

Great lyrical poem with quick witted rhymes though there was a bit repetition towards the middle it was well written none the less. I would advise a bit of revising ...

Great poem White Rabbit! It is quite compelling with a great ending and your ryhmes hit all the right notes to get and keep me hooked all the through. your ...

A bit short but you shared all that you need to in order to makes poem stand out. Ive a read a few poems regarding dreams and I must say ...